| Title: Perfectly Responsible
| 27 Oct 2013 2:21 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Well, Ben might not be of Severus's lot, but at least Sev has someone who can truly understand his situation and whom Sev can talk to. And he also now has a couple of friends to celebrate Harry's birth with! Sweet! (Am wondering if Sev might really know/of Ben's sister?)
Author's Response: Hmm, Ben's sister indeed? Good question ... but alas the first question you ask is one I can't answer. ;) Thanks for the review!
Will Severus be able to see Lily & Harry when he's on leave?
Author's Response: Well, the Falklands war was only around 74 days. So leave isn't likely. Cheers! Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Perfectly Responsible
| 04 Sep 2013 1:02 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Nice contrast in the feel of the narrative in the section where Severus is longing to be back with Lily, as opposed to the interraction with his comrades.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, lovely and specific! My favourite. ;)
Looking forward to more. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Great to hear! Thanks for the review!
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