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Title: Her Eyes 27 Oct 2013 6:27 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm very intrigued by the Hufflepuff girl's reaction to Malfoy's statement-- do we get to find out more about her motivations in future chapters? Good interaction between Severus & Harry after the fight, although Harry might not agree with me!

    Author's Response: Ah, Eleanor! Yes, she will show up again. It is great to hear that you are enjoying it. Haha, yes, Harry probably doesn't agree, but it is nice to know you thought so!
Title: Her Eyes 17 Sep 2013 4:35 am
Reviewer: bianca_slate (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I'm so happy that Severus found Lily's hidden treasure box with the invisibility cloak and photo album in it.
    I'm impressed that a Hufflepuff, Miss Crandall, jumped on Draco first. It seems that Hufflepuffs like Severus.
    I wonder if you will have something in the next chapters refuting Draco and his father's opinions of Severus.
    I look forward to seeing where you take this.
    I bet that the story of how Severus got his medal is as bad or even worse than the story of how he was sent to war in the first place.

    Author's Response: I am glad you are impressed with a Hufflepuff's daring. But is it just her house that approves of Severus ... or was there more to it? Something to think on. Severus' medal story is coming up, so you will definitely find out soon if your hypothesis is right. Thanks so much for the review! It is great to hear your thoughts, opinions, and wonderings.
Title: Her Eyes 17 Sep 2013 3:02 am
Reviewer: Annora (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter again, I enjoyed it a great deal! :)
    Also noticed a bit of a literary symmetry between Severus finding the photo album and Harry finding his dad’s merit badge earlier. I don’t know if it was intended or not, but I think it’s pretty great.

    I also hope you’ll unfold Miss Crandall’s story a bit more.
    Oh, and one more small thing I like: Salazar’s remarks, as they’re both entertaining and meaningful.

    Author's Response: Hey Annora! It is so great to hear that you enjoyed it. The scene with Severus and the photo album was meant to be slightly similar to Harry's discovery, so it is nice to know you liked it. Oh Salazar! He's been so fun to toss in from time to time - good to hear he's appreciated! As for Miss Crandall, she will show up again. Cheers!
Title: Her Eyes 16 Sep 2013 11:57 pm
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed) [Report This]
    Did the girl know someone who committed suicide?

    Author's Response: Hmm, that is the question ... Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Her Eyes 16 Sep 2013 11:55 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Good to hear!

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