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Title: Breathless 25 Nov 2013 4:12 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    A very moving chapter-- I felt my heart clenching time and time again as I read, especially with Sev thinking of Lily and later meeting Harry. And wow-- the potential for Ben to possibly reappear (I hope?!). Nice!

    Author's Response: Hey shadow! Great to hear you enjoyed the chapter! ;)
Title: Breathless 03 Oct 2013 1:35 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Sounds like a big reunion is on the cards - would be good for Severus to have someone to talk to. Wonder if Harry is going to spring a surprise on his dad.

    Author's Response: Hmm, quite. What is Harry up to anyway? Thanks so much for reviewing, rosina. :)
Title: Breathless 02 Oct 2013 1:38 am
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, Ben and Severus should have loads to talk about. Maybe Ben can even help Severus get some real help. Merlin knows, the Ministry didn't have anything lined up to help him get back to daily life after war.
    Great chapter! I look forward to reading more!

    Author's Response: Yes, talk about a lot of years to catch up on! Thanks so much for the review! ;)
Title: Breathless 01 Oct 2013 6:42 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This is quite frankly, the best Severus fic I have ever read. I've liked everything I've ever read of yours, but this one tops them all. The amount of research and thought you put in this really shows without sacrificing the character development. The realism of thought, feelings, and reactions are exactly right. I have wept as I've read about Sev's experiences and felt a bare fraction of what he must have felt from the descriptions of the battles.

    I suspected that Harry's new friend might possibly be related to Ben and am very happy to find that it is true. I look forward to a reunion between the two men who survived such horrors.

    Thank you for writing this. As a U.S. veteran of the first Gulf War (though, thankfully, I did not personally see any combat) and foster sister of a two-time recipient of the Purple Heart it is wonderful to find a thoughtful, realistic portrayal of the effects of war on the people who are sent to fight it. God bless you!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, dancingkatz! It is so good to hear that you are enjoying the story, particularly considering your familiarity with the army. That was what worried me, that the people who were involved with war, fought in one, or know people who have served would not find it to be accurate. So it is especially good to hear positive comments from you! I am glad that the emotional aspect is reaching you, because I figured that even if my portrayal is not perfect historically (Unless you're there, how can it possibly be?) I wanted it to feel somewhat close to what it might have been like. I am glad you are looking forward to a reunion! You are welcome for this story, and thank you for reviewing. God bless you too, and your family as well.
Title: Breathless 01 Oct 2013 5:25 am
Reviewer: SeverusPrince101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you're still offering tissues! Again I love your work, and can barely wait for next Monday, now what is Harry planning on that devious mind of his? he might be a Gryffindor, but he's also half Slytherin. Keep up the good work Whitetail!!!

    your friend, Sev

    Author's Response: *Hands over tissue box*. Great to hear you are still enjoying it. Oh yes ... Harry and his devious plots. Half Slytherin indeed! I suppose you'll just have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for reviewing, Sev!
Title: Breathless 01 Oct 2013 4:28 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Heart breaking. I'm in tears again. How do you do this to me? Update soon.

    Author's Response: Hmm ... well, I keep doing this to you either because I'm evil, or  ... nah, who am I kidding. I'm clearly evil. Great to heart that it is having a strong effect on you. ;) Thanks for reviewing, cara-tanaka!

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