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Reviews For For Valour
And major kudos for coming up with a VC-worthy action that is perfect for Severus and the story and illustrates the nature of heroism. I wouldn't worry about any lack of detail in the fighting - as they say, less is more and your less is definitely more! :) And finally, my father was ground crew in the RAF in WWII. He would have been 20 during the Battle of Britain and though he's told one or two stories of the air raids, he'd then go quiet and change the subject. So, yes, I get the feeling that those who've lived through it often don't like to talk about it, so both Tobias and Severus's reactions ring true for me. Very much looking forward to your update! Author's Response: Hey charlie74656! It is so good to hear that you are enjoying it. I have tried really hard to immerse myself in the topic, and make the Falklands more than just a background, so I am pleased you are finding it to be well portrayed. It is also really fantastic to hear you liked how Severus got the VC, because that seriously kept me up at nights. I was worried it wasn't believable enough, or that it didn't fit, but I really liked what I could do with the situation, so I kept it. Great to hear you also feel that less is more in this situation, because I really could have gone to town with the gore and horrorific sights, but I thought it was't what the story needed, so it is nice to hear you feel the same way! Yes, I spent a lot of time thinking about how Severus and Tobias would react to their experiences, either wanting to talk or not wanting to, and from what I have seen also with people who I have known to have seen action, most don't. Once again, thank you so much for your review, and such a detailed one at that. This kind of feedback really helps me grow as a writer, by allowing me to see through the eyes of the readers. So thank you! Cheers!
And I bet Harry has Ben lying in wait, back at Hogwarts! Author's Response: Good to hear you like Tobias' idea! Hmm, that would be pretty devious of Harry to bring Ben over it secret - I suppose you'll have to see!
Your friend, Sev Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for the well wishes for Midterms! I'll need all the well wishes I can get for my Physics one.*Screams in terror*. I am glad that you got a chance to catch your breath in this chapter, and it is lovely to know that you are faithully waiting for the next! ;) My my, good question ... What is Eileen's involvement? You are definitely right that Harry is half Slytherin, and his grandmother is all Slytherin too, so it is definitely true they are capable of many a devious plot. I suppose you will have to wait and see. Loving the guesswork! Cheers!
This chapter was amazing, too. So many heartwrenching and heartwarming lines, and it’s always a pleasure to have Eileen and her wise words back. Author's Response: Ah yes, I do love writing Eileen. I only wish I could throw more of her in here! And Tobias too. I have a lot of backstory with him and Severus - enough that I could probably make an enitre follow up just between Tobias' death and Severus returning from his war. But alas ... I probably won't. I am glad you are enjoying Eleanor - you shall hear about her somewhat. I quite agree that something like a reunion would be a great deal of fun. Thanks so much for your review, Annora, and your kind words. You definitely made a Monday better! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Good to know you are enjoying it. |
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