Beyond awesome! So glad Ben's back! Yay!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! It is awesome to hear you're happy with Ben's return!
A very moving chapter-- I felt my heart clenching time and time again as I read, especially with Sev thinking of Lily and later meeting Harry. And wow-- the potential for Ben to possibly reappear (I hope?!). Nice!
Author's Response: Hey shadow! Great to hear you enjoyed the chapter! ;)
Nice neat finish to the story. I do like a happy, or at least hopeful, ending. While perhaps not my favourite of your stories from a chapter by chapter light entertainment POV, it has been interesting, well written and a little different. I'm really looking forward to rereading the whole story in one hit when I get a free evening, as I'm sure that will be worthwhile. Thanks for your hard work.
Author's Response: Hi! Great to hear you liked the ending. Yeah, this story *was* very different from my usual stuff, but it is nice to hear that you still found it interesting. ;) Yeah, I think this story would be a lot better when read in one go, just because of the action. You are very welcome, rosina, and thank you for your detailed reviews! Cheers!
I have tears runing down my face. Thank you for this story, it´s beautiful :.)
Author's Response: It is wonderful to know that you found this story so powerful. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Hi Whitetail! Amazing last chapter -- what a solemn, bittersweet and powerful way to end this great and quite exceptional story! Thank you for writing and sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reviewing, Annora. I am pleased that you found the ending so powerful - it wasn't easy to write! You are very welcome, and I would like to thank you for reading For Valour and taking time to review. ;) Cheers!
| Title: For Life
| 05 Nov 2013 11:07 am
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| Reviewer: Gillian (Anonymous)
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Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Gillian!
| Title: For Life
| 05 Nov 2013 7:30 am
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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I'm glad Severus found a flat near his mother, so he and Harry could spend more time with her.
Great story! Loved it!
Author's Response: Hi bianca! I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing! ;)
Cheers Whitetail! I'll leave a proper review later when I can compose myself for words, but rest assured this is quite simply Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks Sev! Great to hear that you enjoyed it. I would be simply tickled pink if you add more to your comments! Thanks for all of your reviews throughout this story! ;) They've been a treat.
Beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Excellent 2 chapters. Loved the reunion with Ben, but the letters from Severus's father are perfect. Not overly sentimental, just brutally open. Good stuff.
Author's Response: Hello! I am so glad you enjoyed the past two chapters, especially Tobias' letters! They were really hard to write, trying to keep them believeable and all. So thank you so much for sharing your sentiments!
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