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Title: Bonding with Brothers 16 Sep 2013 2:46 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why did you change Harry's eyes so much?
    How about a dark green instead?

    Author's Response: I made them the exact colour they are for a very important, plot-advancing reason. The details of this will begin to be explained in the coming chapter, which I am updating now.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 16 Sep 2013 3:20 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Severus and Percy bonded. They seem similar in temperament so they would be good roommates. Since Severus and Harry got on so badly, maybe it's just as well that Harry doesn't have his memories. Having a non-green eyed Harry seems odd. I wonder of Poppy will have any explanation?

    Author's Response: I'm glad, and yes they do. The non green eyes will be explained the coming chapter (which I'm updating now), but remember Poppy is away for the holidays so Severus will have to get his answers elsewhere for now. Thanks!
Title: Bonding with Brothers 16 Sep 2013 3:00 am
Reviewer: tess4aria (Signed) [Report This]
    As always, so fantastic! What a clever and original twist that Severus really feels as if he's experienced the years he jumps. This way, it makes it so much more real for Severus that this is no longer his old life. And that he feels that he has lived years as a Weasley is going to give him a much greater sense of stability to plunge into the whole fatherhood thing. In other words, though I was also anxious, like many of your other readers, to have Harry wake up, I'm so glad you did it this way! And finally, now that Harry is waking up, I am psyched! It looks like you're throwing your usual creative gems into it again! Can't wait to see what you've got planned next :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I agree; you're spot on! *blushes* Thanks for the comments, and your review. I am updating now.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 16 Sep 2013 2:18 am
Reviewer: the stag patronus (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait to see what happens now that Harry is awake!

    Author's Response: Thanks. And the wait is almost over! I'm updating now.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 16 Sep 2013 1:44 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice touch that Sev and Percy get along so well, I think they both need that.

    Author's Response: Thanks. Indeed they do. I look forward to further developing it too. Thanks for the review. I am updating now.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 16 Sep 2013 12:04 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loooooove it. Can't wait for more. :D I think the interactions so far are great.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I am updating now.
Title: Bonding with Brothers 15 Sep 2013 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    At last not sure about him having no memories but looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: More details will be given about the "no memories" thing. It's not exactly what you'd expect. Thanks for the review. Am updating now.
Title: Foreboding 15 Sep 2013 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved how Severus is accepting Molly. Loved the glimpse of Harry and can't wait for him to wake up!
Title: Bonding with Brothers 15 Sep 2013 4:05 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Is he REALLY Harry's father? I cant wait to find out!

    You always have such original storylines! Love it.

    Author's Response: Heh, i can't really answer that. Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review. I'm about to update now.
Title: Foreboding 11 Sep 2013 2:47 am
Reviewer: HonorLove (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For a title, maybe "Growing pains"? That said, I'm loving teenaged!Severus and am eagerly looking forward to him and Harry interacting.

    Only criticism I have is that I feel like Severus deaged mentally too fast. That said, you've done a fantastic job explaining why that is--I just think I'd have taken it a slightly different route.

    Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to the next installment!

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