LOL. I'm reading this with my friend and as soon as we read the last part of the chapter she said "Get ready Potter, cause you're about to shit yourself."
We both love the story so far, and how you portrayed Snape! :D
| Title: Spit it Out
| 04 Dec 2013 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic ending can't wait to read more
i torn between emotions right now. on the one hand I'm glad that harry has a dad i his life. but on the other hand i feel sorry that he only just found out and that his dad his a complete git in public to him. i know Dumbledore wants him as a spy but harry needs him more than others do. he should be able to go to his dad and not have to worry about keeping it a secret. he should be able to tell his friends. great chapter. i cant wait for the next chapter so that i can find out what happens. :)
Ah ha! I knew it! I quite liked the conversation with Snape, and the way you ended the chapter was rather fun. ;) Although, not sure if Snape would use the phrase "Chicken Out". I just can't picture it, is all. The image of the class covered in blue slime was a funny one!
Wow...real shocker! Can't wait for more, please update again soon!
ahhhhhhh I told him but lets see what Harry has to say. I bet he says something like then who am I causing Sev to sigh and groan about dunderheaded gryffindors and being cluless
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