Title: Prologue
| 20 Aug 2014 2:46 am
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Reviewer: Jtz (Signed)
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Cute start
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
I really liked the opening tale of Father Christmas. Asking the house elves to help make toys was a natural. I like the way you worked in Harry and Severus at the end, too.
Author's Response: It is fantastic to hear you enjoyed the prologue! The transition was a bit tough though, so it is good you liked how Harry and Severus were worked in. In the rough draft of this story, there was no prologue, so I am glad it was appreciated. Cheers!
Wow, what a great opener. On to see where Snape and Harry fit in.
Author's Response: Great to hear you liked it, rosina! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Great background for setting up the story! And now-- off for some action!
Author's Response: Hey shadow! Great to hear you liked the setup. I was considering just cutting the prologue so it is good you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reviewing!
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