| Title: Sparks Over Cokeworth
| 19 Jan 2014 12:42 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A nice touch of angst to stir the story up thank you
Author's Response: Ah yes, a little action and a dash of angst always spices things up! Thanks for reviewing.
I was afraid that it was going too smoothly. It seems that Harry And Severus are going to be learning more about each other. I llike the idea of the reindeer using apparition. It makes sense - they are, after all, magical reindeer.
Author's Response: Surprise, BEDLAM! Yeah, had to throw some disaster in somewhere. Glad to hear you liked the apparition with reindeer thing. Thought I would have some fun with the reindeer folklore. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Sparks Over Cokeworth
| 11 Jan 2014 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Stupid Muggles, building obstacles. Snape and Harry seem to beginning to work together, but what secrets will Spinners End let escape?
Author's Response: Ah, what secrets indeed? Thanks for reviewing, rosina!
Despite the disaster, I like the way they perform as a genuine team to help Rain and in extricating the sleigh. An unlikely team, as they started out, but Snape and Harry are finding a rhythm now. Nice!
Author's Response: Ah yes ... they're getting there! Cheers for thr review!
Oh by the gods ToT poor Rain.
Author's Response: Poor Rain indeed! I appreciate the comment!
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