Yes! I’m dancing with glee at Snape putting that odious toad in her place!
(Language again sorry) Holy fucking shit Snape 😂😂 ‘don’t you lol at me like that Potter, I know everything’ 😂😂😂 that is absolutely great I love that. That is my favourite part of the story so far hand down- that whole bit where Snape talks😂😂😂
Title: Four: Out of the Fire
| 04 Feb 2014 10:45 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely scene between them thank you so much
I am so hooked on this story, I can't even tell you. Throwing Snape into the mix with Umbridge and the Dursleys is one of my all-time favorite setups. You write very well, too, and I think you are keeping everyone in pretty good character. Can't WAIT for more!
Stop leaving us like this....ooh I hate reading unfinished stories...
I shall see you next chapter okay? keep up the good work hun :)
Either Umbridge is stupid or completely blind, cause any other smart person (hell, even an animal!) would have ran for the hills if they made Snape that pissed!
Lol!!! Yes Snape sure showed her who's boss! I love it! I hope in the next chapter Snape asks Harry what's up about the lines (:
Title: Four: Out of the Fire
| 01 Feb 2014 7:06 pm
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Mmmm,
es un excelente capítulo, por Salazar!!!, Umbridge esta loca, en realidad creo que quiere morir como le va a decir eso a Snape.....!!
Fue fascinante, y el principio del capítulo, la debilidad de Harry, eso fue brillante,
sin duda espero que puedas actualizar pronto.
fue un capítulo realmente bueno
Title: Four: Out of the Fire
| 01 Feb 2014 1:56 am
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Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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Wow - I'm on the edge of my seat - this is a wonderfully descriptive storyline and I'm enjoying the tension - keep it up!!
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