Totally awesome that Harry made that bet! I loved the interaction. There’s so much detail with depth in your writing. It’s a true pleasure to read.
Fuckin smartass Potter
But SNAPE THO
‘How dare he be so confusing, it’s not fair. He’s not allowed to be confusing that’s cheating’ 😗😂😂 but srsly he seemed well pissed he couldn’t figure out how the ‘perfect pampered spoiled chosen brat’ (basically his words tho) could clean 15 dirty ass cauldrons in just an hour 😂
I really enjoyed the chapter. The bet between Harry and Snape was a good one and made Severus re-evaluate Harry. Now, I just wonder how Harry is going to get his gloves off without Severus seeing his hand.
| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 08 Feb 2014 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter a very original detention!
*giggles* I love it when Snape is portrayed as having a subtle sense of humor. He's certainly no cut-up, but I can totally see him as having a dry wit about him.
I'm glad that Snape is catching on that's something's wrong but hasn't figured it out yet.
It always annoys me when he just somehow "intuits" the whole problem. And usually with very few clues from Harry. Then suddenly they are best buds.
Well done!
| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 07 Feb 2014 3:25 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love your writing style. I've always loved the idea of those two being stuck together in a magically funny way, but I don't think I've actually seen it done before - at least not well. This is very refreshing. Everything else I've seen along this theme has pretty much been along the stale old lines of 'dumbledore shoved them in a room together and magically locked it until they got along.' This is so much better because it forces them to be in each other's presence without isolating them from supporting characters who add depth to the situation. Great job!
| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 07 Feb 2014 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Interesting sory :)
The idea of betting with Severus: great :)
I hope to see next chapters.
| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 06 Feb 2014 11:52 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I like how this is developing - Snape becoming curious as to Harry's situation, and Harry standing up to Snape with attitude. I'm glad that it could become a bit longer than you were anticipating.
I absolutely love this chapter. Harry vs. Snape- Harry wins and Snape is confused. Great story so far, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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