Wow, that was a raw and powerful chapter. You wrote it amazingly well. It literally took my breath away.
oh gosh that escalated quickly. D:< poor bby harry and i wonder what's snape's reaction throughout all that!
loved how your last line had emphasised the whole point of harry's need to be good for snape: all for some more information about his mum )':
Oh, Harry. Oh the poor baby. I'm cheering him on for finally yelling at Snape. I hope he comes to his senses soon and gives poor Harry one hell of any apology.
| Title: Thirteen: Cruelty
| 17 Nov 2015 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Oh, wow, what a great chapter! The ups-and-downs of Harry's emotions were very well drawn. And his confrontation with Snape was perfect, all the things you'd absolutely want Harry to say for himself, even as I completely emphasised with his feeling of humiliation for its public nature. I really felt him as a teenager in this, between the pretty girls and the crushing disappointment in Snape and hiding in the cupboard after. Wonderful
Loved the angst! Cant wait for the next chapter..
Major drama/angst. Keep 'em coming! :-)
I'm glad Harry stood up for himself when Prof Snape was being a bully!
Awwwww.... poor Harry! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Really enjoying these updates, what a brilliant story!!! You write so well and you really capture the characters perfectly and with such sensitivity.
| Title: Thirteen: Cruelty
| 16 Nov 2015 11:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Dyrim (Anonymous)
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I love this story. I was so excited to see it updated again. This chapter especially is really well done. Super emotional.
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