| Title: Twenty-Three: No Better Protector
| 05 Feb 2022 2:06 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Wow, that’s another original twist
OKAY I WAS GONNA DO MY HOMEWORK AFTER THIS CHAPTER BUT THERE IS NO WAY THATS HAPPENING NOW!!!!
Egad, a major plot twist! I didn't see that one coming. Albus must not have know about the quill the first time around or he would have prevented it.
| Title: Twenty-Three: No Better Protector
| 11 May 2017 2:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Spuffy57 (Signed)
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Fantastic dialogue between Snape and Umbridge! I loved seeing Draco redeemed. I hope he comes into play as a larger character for both Sev and Harry's relationship in the remainder of story.
And OH!!! Oh my Lord you had me screaming and pounding the bed with this chapter! I'm thankful my roommate is out of town...OH MY GOSH THAT TWIST ENDING NO YOU DIDNT!!!!! Wth, where's the next update??? You cannot just leave us hanging here, you beautiful bastard! (*-*)
| Title: Twenty-Three: No Better Protector
| 09 May 2017 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic scene I love Severus in full throttle thank you so much
| Title: Twenty-Three: No Better Protector
| 08 May 2017 3:41 am
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| Reviewer: Miranda (Signed)
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guau!
thanks God I have found this story. You have done pretty well, I love it! please keep it up!
thanks.
I'm so happy you updated! This was amazing and that was a completely unexpected plot twist!
I can't tell you how much I love this work... Okay, I can. I love, love ,love, love, LOVE it so much!!
Poor Harry! Assure me he'll make it through, please!
Hold on Sev! Don't give up hope just yet!
On a more serious note, great piece, really. I absolutely love you're Luna in this story. She's perfect and so in character. (It bothers me so much when people do not keep her in character.) And I adore Harry's and hers relationship. So cute!! (I love friends.)
You are a talented author, and you have done, amazing with this story. Keep updating!!! (It makes me so happy when you do.)
GAH!!!!
I love that you've updated this, I really do. However, GAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
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