Title: Twenty-Five: False Finality
| 05 Feb 2022 2:18 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I loved seeing Severus with a conviction to do the right thing. The lead up to this point has felt natural thanks to your wonderful writing.
I liked Snape's conversation with Luna. They seem like an odd couple but I can imagine them as getting along well in spite of it.
Title: Twenty-Five: False Finality
| 29 May 2017 6:16 pm
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Reviewer: Miranda (Signed)
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Love your plot! Thank you!
Title: Twenty-Five: False Finality
| 22 May 2017 5:20 pm
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Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed)
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Great job! I've very much enjoyed these last few chapters. I could see a definite shift in the story from when Harry ended up sick, but I have a feeling the tension is not over yet. I look forward to read the next chapter.
Title: Twenty-Five: False Finality
| 20 May 2017 7:54 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating and bringing Luna into the story, I love her! Please let us know the result of the chess match, a very good idea between those two
Oh!! The reappearance of Luna! I love that girl. She's perfect! I'm sitting at the edge of my seat waiting for Harry to wake up. I love this story sooo much! I'll be waiting for the next!
Title: Twenty-Five: False Finality
| 20 May 2017 1:56 am
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Reviewer: Miranda (Signed)
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I love that Luna was featured in this chapter and we get to see Sev's soft spot for her. She is such a sweet girl.
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