Title: Six: Custody of the Enigma
| 08 Mar 2014 11:52 pm
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Congratulation by excelent chapter!!!!
I love this chapter.
Fue genial, me encanta como retratas a Severus como lo haces relacionarse con Harry, es sencillamente fantástico
ame el capĂtulo realmente
felicidades por algo tan bien hecho
actualiza pronto por favor
Title: Six: Custody of the Enigma
| 08 Mar 2014 5:11 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter very well written thank you
Title: Six: Custody of the Enigma
| 08 Mar 2014 6:00 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Ha I'm so surprised that shape only prohibited Harry from asking questions that night. Harry will be like a dog with a bone until he finds out what snape's relationship to his mother was. Good work! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Title: Six: Custody of the Enigma
| 07 Mar 2014 12:56 pm
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Fantastic! Yes, ten feet is very small, very close. Poor Snape! And poor Harry! I really, really liked the argument between Snape and Albus. And I am really glad that Snape saw reason and wasn't too mad about Harry for going to far apart from Snape. He probably needed to blow off some steam. I loved it! Thanks for the update!
I absolutely love this! The mix of angsty emotions of Harry's, and to some degree from Severus, mixed with the practical problems of being stuck so closely together ... You've just managed it perfectly!
I really loved this chapter and please update soon again!
The guardianship was a bit of a surprise. Albus certainly stunned Harry and Snape with it. I was glad that Severus was reasonable with Harry when he found that Harry was unable to go to his room. It sounds like the two are tentatively starting to accept each other. Looking forward to more.
Title: Six: Custody of the Enigma
| 07 Mar 2014 2:59 am
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Reviewer: jgroovydaisy (Anonymous)
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Loving this. Looking forward to more. Thanks!
Title: Six: Custody of the Enigma
| 07 Mar 2014 2:27 am
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg!
Hee hee. Dumbles has a plan. That is for sure. Guardianship of Harry. This should be interesting. I love that Harry loves his room and that he was so happy to have gained Snape's praise and approval.
I love this story and so glad that you've updated. I can't wait for the next update.
I really enjoyed the chapter. The bet between Harry and Snape was a good one and made Severus re-evaluate Harry. Now, I just wonder how Harry is going to get his gloves off without Severus seeing his hand.
Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 08 Feb 2014 7:27 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter a very original detention!
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