*giggles* I love it when Snape is portrayed as having a subtle sense of humor. He's certainly no cut-up, but I can totally see him as having a dry wit about him.
I'm glad that Snape is catching on that's something's wrong but hasn't figured it out yet.
It always annoys me when he just somehow "intuits" the whole problem. And usually with very few clues from Harry. Then suddenly they are best buds.
Well done!
| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 07 Feb 2014 3:25 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love your writing style. I've always loved the idea of those two being stuck together in a magically funny way, but I don't think I've actually seen it done before - at least not well. This is very refreshing. Everything else I've seen along this theme has pretty much been along the stale old lines of 'dumbledore shoved them in a room together and magically locked it until they got along.' This is so much better because it forces them to be in each other's presence without isolating them from supporting characters who add depth to the situation. Great job!
| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 07 Feb 2014 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Interesting sory :)
The idea of betting with Severus: great :)
I hope to see next chapters.
| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 06 Feb 2014 11:52 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I like how this is developing - Snape becoming curious as to Harry's situation, and Harry standing up to Snape with attitude. I'm glad that it could become a bit longer than you were anticipating.
I absolutely love this chapter. Harry vs. Snape- Harry wins and Snape is confused. Great story so far, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I so look forward to your updates! Another wonderful chapter! We'll see if Snape will ever figure out that Harry is not his father (:
Wonderful! And so much fun too!
I can see it playing out: Harry happily scrubbing away while Snape looks on, his mind going like "What .... The ..... FUCK?!"
I loved every word of it! Please update soon again!
| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 06 Feb 2014 3:14 am
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| Title: Five: Cauldrons Challenge
| 06 Feb 2014 2:40 am
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| Reviewer: Laura (Anonymous)
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This is perfect! Keep up the good work :D
I feel like I'm reading a drabble...I think I'll ignore my future emails about this story(as its the only one I'm recieving for some reason due to a glitch) And wait until your 2 chapters in or so..
It was a good chapter, I love Sev's point of view....
And I'll see you next chapter yeah? ;)
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