I loved the father son talk!
I loved the father son talk!
| Title: Forty-Seven: The Value of Hatred
| 01 Feb 2020 10:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating your wonderful story especially when you have been unwell. I hope they can all work together to defeat the “dark git”! Love that phrase
| Title: Forty-Seven: The Value of Hatred
| 31 Jan 2020 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Feenrai (Signed)
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Yay!! I've been sick, so it was a while before I got to read this chapter, but now that I have, I can say it was fantastic, and worth the wait! I really wanted everything to be worked out now, for Sirius to be understanding and so forth, but I'm actually glad you didn't do that. Much as I wanted it, it would have been unrealistic. The way you are handling the pacing and character growth is spot on. I look forward to where they go from here :)
Is it bad that my faith in Sirius is weak?
| Title: Forty-Six: His Own Merits
| 22 Jan 2020 4:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Well done Severus! At least he and, following his example, Lupin are starting to behave like adults, not sure about Black! Great chapter and thank you so much
Well that was some heavy chapter! Severus taking the stand to be the adult in the situation even with that accusation! Of course they all fought like school children first but that's a lot of emotion regarding at least Severus and Sirius without adding in Lupin and those issues and that accusation! Wonder what Harry will say when he wakes. Cant wait to see where this goes! You know the 30th is really a long way off! Lol j/k kind of cause it really is a ways off but then again I know waiting for it will make that chapter that much better lol!
| Title: Forty-Six: His Own Merits
| 17 Jan 2020 12:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Feenrai (Signed)
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It's nice to see both some more details on the effects the blood quill is having on Harry, as well as some measure of progression on the part of the three bratty adults in *hopefully* learning to get along, at least for Harry's sake.
I hope in future chapters we see the four of them grow closer all around, as Harry will need all the support he can get.
I further hope that Harry will in time gain some level of control over his wild powers, and even if he can no longer use wands, still be able to do magic at will and with less or no harm to himself. It is my thought and wonder that perhaps it is the wild and uncontrolled aspect of his current magic that is harming him, because it is just so powerful it drains some of his life force, essentially, not just his magical core. I'd like to see him lock down control over that, so he can wield magic freely again, and *without* the repercussions, or at least with the choice in whether he draws that much or not...could definitely be the power the Dark Lord knows not...
I look forward to the next chapter of your story, and eventually seeing where, indeed, you intend to go with this storyline!
Thank you for the lovely update :)
| Title: Forty-Five: The Monumental Prank
| 08 Jan 2020 10:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much I loved the confrontation with Sirius and Remus especially when Sirius fainted, thank you so much
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