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Reviews For A Hogwart's Carol
Title: Chapter 8 19 Jan 2014 10:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good and dramatic thank you

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

    I'm glad you're enjoying it. 

Title: Chapter 7 19 Jan 2014 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Chapter 6 19 Jan 2014 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response:

    Thank you

     

Title: Chapter 5 19 Jan 2014 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very disturbing but well written thank you

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

    It was much darker than that when I first wrote it. 

Title: Chapter 4 19 Jan 2014 10:04 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a well written familiar scene the lack of horror but the matter of fact way it is written make it much more powerful!

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Chapter 3 19 Jan 2014 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A sad scene but very well written thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Chapter 2 19 Jan 2014 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good representation of Tobias thank you

    Author's Response:

    Not being an Englishman and never having really encountered the various regional dialects in the visitors, ex pats etc to my native island home I had to rely on what I'd come across on TV, movies, books.

    I liked him. 

Title: Chapter 1 19 Jan 2014 9:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start thank you

    Author's Response: You're welcome.
Title: Chapter 11 19 Jan 2014 4:16 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked that Harry got his vision fixed for Christmas. When I was small, I had an eye disease and my parents were told that my eyes couldn't be corrected. after some years it was found that glasses would give me regular vision but for years everything looked like an Impressionist painting to me. So I can appreciate what a wonderful gift good sight is.

    Author's Response: My wish was to see my children grow before I lost my sight. I got my wish and then some. I'm grateful for it every day.
Title: Chapter 10 19 Jan 2014 4:12 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the description of Harry's new quarters. Who wouldn't want a bathroom that looked like a forest glade with a pond and waterfall? The Lily angel for the tree top was a nice scene, too.

    Author's Response:

    My mum grew up in the mountains and on several occassions she took us to a place in the bush that had a water fall and swimming hole.

     

    The angel is a tribute to my mum. When she was first diagnosed with a terminal condition she made all of her daughters and grandchildren a Christmas angel to remember her by. 


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