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Reviews For A Hogwart's Carol
Title: Chapter 9 19 Jan 2014 4:06 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that the Potters and Eileen all visited Albus as well. I am sure Lily really let him have it.

    Author's Response:

    There is room there for a expansion at a leter date.

    Perhaps they will all visit him at once. 

Title: Chapter 8 19 Jan 2014 4:00 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wondered if an angry Lily would be the last ghost to visit Snape. She definately would get through to him.

    Author's Response:

    Don't cross a red head. They're nice and sweet until you do. 

Title: Chapter 7 19 Jan 2014 3:55 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked your James Potter. And Snape clearly has a good side if he comforted little Harry before Hagrid arrived. He also is where the abused students are sorted so he must be the one who can recognize and care for them. Potter seems to have gotten through to him about Harry's circumstances.

    Author's Response: He seems to be more at ease with his snakes. Had Harry been sorted to his house things would have been different.
Title: Chapter 6 19 Jan 2014 3:48 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Slughorn in standing up for Severus. It was a good contrast to how Snape treated Harry in his first class.

    Author's Response: Slughorn always struck me as a person who played fair.
Title: Chapter 4 19 Jan 2014 3:42 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry Potter, house elf. At last Severus gets to see the truth of Harry's home life.

    Author's Response: Seeing is beleiving so they say.
Title: Chapter 3 19 Jan 2014 3:40 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. Sounds like his mum was the person young Severus really obeyed from his reaction. I'm glad he was able to have a Christmas of some sort as a child.

    Author's Response: I think my mum and Eileen were cut from the same cloth.
Title: Chapter 2 19 Jan 2014 3:37 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that Tobias was shackled with empty liquor bottles. That seems really appropriate. It didn't seem like he made much of an effort to convince Severus to change his ways though.

    Author's Response: Yes he could have but would Severus had thought his father was only out to save himself?
Title: Chapter 1 19 Jan 2014 3:35 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    And we are off. Harry is in detention cleaning cauldrons and Snape is red-marking papers so all is right at Hogwarts at the moment.

    Author's Response:

    As it should be. 

    How much red ink do you think Snape goes through a year?

     

Title: Epilogue 19 Jan 2014 12:09 am
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've read the rest of your story and - I have to admit, that I'm dissapointed. Too sweet, too quick changes in way of acting. Too naive Harry.
    Good idea, but written without any look inside of psychological aspects of such difficult situation. Possibilities were many, but unfortunately you haven't exploit them...

    Author's Response:

    I have plans to expand on it in the future.

    The ending was rushed due to the deadline. 

    Coming from an abusive background I didn't want to pour too much of that into it. 

Title: Chapter 8 18 Jan 2014 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    so far, interesting and nicely written redaction of Dickens.
    I will read the rest with interest.

    Author's Response: Thank you.

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