| Title: Oh And Harry…
| 19 Jun 2021 11:38 pm
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| Reviewer: hydra (Signed)
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i wanna read this fic but will it end nicely
| Title: Oh And Harry…
| 07 Nov 2015 1:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I generally like your stories, and you write well, but you consistently make one mistake that drives me nuts. "Lead" (pronounced "led") is never, ever, the past tense of "lead" (pronounced "leed"). The past tense is always "led." "They told me to lead the group, so I wrote the directions with a lead pencil and led them away."
Looking forward to seeing the rest of this story.
I don't know why I found it so hilarious, but I couldn't stop laughing at how Harry essentially forced Snape into signing the form. I love it when Snape gets put into those irritating situations!
I wondered why Harry would be going to another school. Makes sense. I was a bit surprised that Snape signed on that easily but he has to know that Harry could use all the training he can get.
When I saw the summary, I sort of thought, "what??" but after reading this chapter I'm very much intrigued. Also, Harry apparently running low on money is definitely something I'm curious about.
Holy moly, I'm so glad you wrote this! I thought it was positively Slytherin of Harry to ask Snape in front of all the other teachers, who would be really mad if Snape turned him down after they all had said yes. Nice job, Harry. Thanks for sharing, I'm looking forward to more!
| Title: Oh And Harry…
| 03 Mar 2014 6:08 pm
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| Reviewer: r.1412 (Anonymous)
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This story is really good. Fresh and bring us to a new world. I don't really mind reading much of the classes, in fact I really enjoy it. It's so bad that Severus started bad mouthing Harry in the beginning.It seems so cruel and low. It's really good that there are some people who don't judge him so quickly. Gan looks so wise and deep. I am looking forward for some of Harry's meditation learning with him. This is amazing and very good story. Keep writing. I' m waiting to read more. Love this story so much. Thank you
| Title: Oh And Harry…
| 28 Jan 2014 12:41 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good start to an original story thank you
I'm finally getting a chance to reread and review this story! I like how you make a point to show that, despite the fact that Harry has been in the wizarding world for many years, he still is rather clueless.
It was also pretty brilliant that Harry asked Severus in front of the entire staff and student population of Hogwarts.... Can't very well deny him then, can he?
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