I hate that he’s cold all the time! I wish someone would notice and help him out! Fantastic so far!
I hate that he’s cold all the time! I wish someone would notice and help him out! Fantastic so far!
I hate that he’s cold all the time! I wish someone would notice and help him out! Fantastic so far!
Great story as usual. In the second paragraph the correct spelling is 'leper' not 'lepper '. Cheers!
Oh poor Harry! I can't wait for the three professors who sided with Snape realize their mistake!
Typo here, I think. ( The first team to incapacitate both of their opponents gets the high mark for today. The first team to have both members incapacitated will get a failing mark for the day.) The second sentence was backward?
Poor Harry, I just want to hug him!
Author's Response: It's just saying the first team wins and the first team out loses.
Title: Professor Horrible
| 06 Feb 2014 12:43 am
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Her minor should feel slighty bad about ignoring Harry. I realize that she made other friends there, but I mean, really? Harry was like her first friend! But it's all good now because she realized she was kinda pushing him to the side and definitely made up for it. Especially by standing up to Snape! I do love how shocked Hernione was when she found out that Harry was taking 8 courses!
I also loved the battle they had in Snapes class.
Them accusing him of stealing though... What the heck?! They're all horrible people for not looking closer at the situation. You outdid yourself with this chapter! Great job!
Title: Professor Horrible
| 28 Jan 2014 11:22 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry I had a lump in my throat! Very well written thank you
Title: Professor Horrible
| 27 Jan 2014 6:19 am
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Me siento sumamente triste por Harry realmente nada de lo que esta sucediendo es justo, casi lloro....puede ser porque soy maestro, y esto es bulling, y es tan condenadamente triste pero, fue un gran capítulo
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