I love you and Gan and the slow yet still perfect pace this story is taking. I was however kinda disappointed when harry didn'show his awsome planning skills he seemed to have during training (you know, when the pairs fought against each other he seemed to be able to analyse everything) but you still managed to make everything turn outpretty good!
Oh and his fear of August is really well done! And lastly, is it just me or are there less characters shown? I mean where are the girls hermoine hang out with or did she gave them up fully? Or just the other students in general...and/or the teachers? I also guess you won't write any classes in detail anymore but I think it would be kinda nice to sometimes read more detailed ones...just my opinon ^_^
Sorry for the long rant. Please keep being awesome, you are great at that.
Have a nice day.
Author's Response: The other students are there they just don't have to be mentioned. I like to really just focus on the main characters and in this case the story is very Harry centric. In a lot of my stories the lesser characters really take a back seat in the story to focus on Harry and his thoughts and feelings. He's not really interacting with a lot of people in the story at this point so we're not seeing a lot of the characters. It's just implied that he's seeing Hermione in some of his classes that she is now taking with him and at meal times.
It's good to hear what you want to see in the story, that is always welcome. Thanks for the review.