Awww, I really hoped that Harry would win............
Title: The Duel
| 14 Jun 2015 4:39 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter and I loved the duel, you have a wonderful imagination for duelling!
Kissing Trelawney!!! Ha! Definitely an image I'd rather not dwell on! Exciting dueling sequences, and I was so glad Harry didn't forget his moonfruit... Or that nobody else had either stolen it or piusonef it sitting there in his room. (My imagination was working overtime!)
Title: The Duel
| 31 May 2015 3:26 am
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Reviewer: jane (Anonymous)
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I am so glad you updated- I love this story. I'm glad Kushi won- it's nice to see Harry be a good loser at something he usually wins at. Loving the Snape scenes the best (of course.) I really like how Harry is responding to Snape helping him, but is not even aware of it yet. And... it seems like Harry could have won his duel if he had used magery....
Author's Response: Yeah it's hard because naturally I'm rooting for Harry and want him to win, but the reality is you can't win every time, and I think Harry is humble enough to be a good loser. I really felt writing this whole competition thing that Harry didn't want to do it for the certificate but more for fun and only really did it because Snape wanted him to.
Harry did a good job with the duel even if he lost. I was rather glad the other contestant won. So often Harry is invincible that it was refreshing to have him lose for a change. I'm also happy to see Snape and Adeline's relationship progressing. Naturally, all the students know and are joking about it.
Author's Response: Yeah, I am always rooting for Harry to win but at the same time know that it's not natural for him to win every time and I think he has the good grace to be a good loser when he does lose. It also helps that he likes Kushi and that I like Kushi as a character so it's good to see characters I like win. I was almost sad that Axle and Draco had to lose because I like them as characters in this story too.
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