Very interesting, all the theory behind apparating. Is that stuff you read somewhere else, or made up yourself? It’s very involved; nice!
Author's Response: I just made it up. I like figuring out how magic works and insert it into world building.
Oh my! Harry is clueless, Hermione likes him, how difficult is it to understand? I liked how you explained Apparation. How did you come up with this theory?
Author's Response: Things like that just come out of my head ;) I have other fan fics I've written on other sites where I've written how apparation works differently. I don't know how I come up with it, it just happens.
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| 14 Jun 2015 3:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to be back in this story thank you for the lovely long chapter! I think I've missed some chapters so I'll have to go back and check
| Title: When Summer Ends
| 07 Jun 2015 2:37 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Lindo capítulo, interesantes reflexiones de Harry sobre la vida, y alabo tu imaginación para crear la teoría de aparición,
brillante capítulo
PD: Según yo, Hermione se enamoro de Harry, eso no me lo esperaba (si es verdad)
Trying to envision Ron at Gemini... Glad that it looks like Draco and Harry might be friends back at Hogwarts, and AWWW, the Firebolt! Fantastic description of Apparition! I'd never even tried to wrap my mind around it; it's just what Wizards DO! Love it!
I never understood about harry money situations. How will he able to afford Hogwarts but the school will pay half for Ron next year. His parent s and Sirius should of left him something he should not be completely broke. He has a hard enough life as it is poor kid.
Author's Response: Did you read the first two chapters of the story? Harry spent all of his gold on entrance to Gemini. It was expensive and that's why he had to sell his broom also. If he had chosen not to go to Gemini, he would have had enough money to get through the last two years of Hogwarts and then some.
| Title: When Summer Ends
| 03 Jun 2015 2:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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I love this story so much! I can't wait to see what happens about Harry's 6th year school supplies. Who pays for them, is it Snape? If so how will Harry react? Thank you for the recent updates, I really can't wait to see what happens next :)
Doing in great love caring Snape .
Cool story. Not much need for elongating the story more, consideeing the action Harry has faced... I suppose even he deserves some rest. :P
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