I definitely didn’t expect Voldemort to show up again so soon!
I definitely didn’t expect Voldemort to show up again so soon!
Hm, sometimes, when there is such a battle and everyone tells Harry to run, he, like a reckless idiot, stays and fights, I don't like it at all, but when you have gone and done the opposite of that, I am wondering if the reckless Harry is better. I didn't even read the whole chapter of Harry being a coward. Though I like the story line of Kahr falling and the mad man attacking Boden. I like the mentality of August now. Harry's arm was hurting, has he splinched himself? The story is good, but I don't think that you have captured the true personality of Harry, anyway, I like it so far. Can you show us something with Severus' P.O.V? I want to know what is going on in Hogwarts. I liked what he did to the bathtub in Privet Drive. Harry is quite powerful. I liked how the conflict of Harry and Ron was solved. I would like to see Harry fight. Whatever, are you taking a break? Is it on a indefinite hiatus? When do you plan to update? Its not abandoned, is it? Please promise to complete this story, even if it is 5 years from now, it is good. You will, won't you? I can count on it, can't I?
Author's Response: Harry didn't actually run because he was a coward and afraid of fighting, even though that's what he's been thinking. You said you didn't read the entire chapter. Maybe you should. It does give some insight as to why he ran even though he isn't entirely sure himself why at this point. It's more got to do with Snape than with Voldemort. Harry has too much fear of being a coward or being 'Slytherin-like' to run from a fight or from danger, as evidenced by him jumping in to save August after worrying himself silly over being called a Slytherin and hiding during the tournament. What he's running from is emotional in nature. He ran from Hogsmeade and ended up at the Dursleys, but when he left the Dursleys he wasn't running from anything, he was running towards something, and ended up at Boden. What that is right now I'll leave for you to figure out, though I may clarify in an author's note at the end of the story.
Wow. This is quite an action-packed chapter. I've spent the past few days reading the story, and really enjoyed watching Harry grow through the adversities that he faced at the summer school. I am really looking forward to reading more, and to seeing how everything will turn out in the end.
Really enjoying this. Wonderful job
I pray for your families and yo schools safety Alvar August.
Title: Falling
| 08 Aug 2017 8:23 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very interesting chapter
I love how the other schools and past characters come into play like this.
All of these stories I love getting updated just makes me so happy! This is another of my favorites and seeing that it has a new chapter makes my day. Ugh, hate that Kar has lost so many and I hope Gan is not one of them.
So much drama here, I have to take bits and bobs of it at a time (especially at the beginning of the summer). So much work to go after one child, I have to wonder how Voldemort decided to go after the foreign schools. Unless there really was a spy, it would have been difficult to pin down Harry's location. Then again, failed occlumency has possibly struck again.
I almost want to see Harry waking up in the Beaubatons infirmary with Snape hovering over him. I wonder if he suspects like the way that Narcissa somehow knew.
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