I enjoyed this first chapter and I look forward to more. This is one plot point I've always wondered about....it seems so obvious that the Dursley's would skip town the minute harry was off to Hogwarts. They have wanted to be rid of him since he first arrived, they probably think now that harry's back in the WW and the focus is off them, they can abandon him with no legal consequences. Also, Petunia is aware of the wards and figures that if she forces them to fall, then there is no way harry will be brought back to them. Though harsh, if i was in the Dursley's position and had their mindset, i'd do the same thing.
I was glad that Albus sent Minerva and Severus both to look for Harry. Though Albus will probably be in for it from Minerva when they get back to Hogwarts. I especially liked the scene where Snape hears Harry talking to Hedwig while they are at the station. He knows Harry wasn't lying and maybe it will give him something to think about.
| Title: Conversations
| 07 Feb 2014 1:42 am
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| Reviewer: Gillian Heron (Anonymous)
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why the cliffhanger, please continue this story, it is so good :))
Author's Response: I love cliffhangers. I'll continue it but it'll take me time. Thanks for the review.
Great start, can't wait to see where this story goes.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad you liked it.
Looking forward to more, update again soon!
Looking forward to more, update again soon!
Author's Response: You submitted this review twice so I'll just respond to one. I'm glad you liked it and I will update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review.
Looking forward to more, update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you like it so far.
Great start. I can't wait for more.
I did notice a little error you might want to fix. You mentioned that Harry left his trunk by the closet when he went upstairs and then he gets stuff out of it while he's upstairs. ;-)
Author's Response: Yeah, I noticed that when I posted it on FanFiction and I fixed it there so, eventually, I'll fix it here too. Thanks for catching that though.
Wow! What an interesting beginning. I love the fact that Harry was talking to Hedwig and Severus overheard him. I can't wait for more. Excellent work! :3
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm actually kinda proud of that scene. Thank you for your review.
| Title: Conversations
| 05 Feb 2014 5:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good start well written and good characterisation I'm looking forward to some more!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I really glad that I"m doing something right when it comes to characterization. That's always been my weak point. Thanks for your review.
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