| Title: September: The Beginning of an Ending
| 05 Oct 2022 10:33 am
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| Reviewer: Gryphonia (Signed)
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| Title: September: The Beginning of an Ending
| 03 Mar 2022 1:32 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I just re-read Prisoners (which I absolutely adore), and am excited to see from your author notes that it is a love child of this story. So I’m intrigued and looking forward to starting the ride.
| Title: September: The Beginning of an Ending
| 18 Jun 2016 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Dimplz (Signed)
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Wow fantastic start!!!
I am immediately drawn in! What is going on with Harry and Snape? They seem to be getting along so how did that come about? What was in the Prophet? Why are they late getting to Hogwarts? Why are they taking the train instead of apparation or floo?
This first chapter makes me WANT to click the Next button, as it is supposed to! It's not filled with tons of backstory or head musing. The characters are doing something interesting and I want to find out more. I hardly ever see a compelling first chapter in fanfiction (which is too bad). Great job! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Wow, what a compliment. I'm really very flattered to hear the start is so compelling. I had no idea how to begin this one to be completely honest, so I am glad it is effective. Cheers, Whitetail
I was both delighted and horrified to discover that I apparently never finished reading this fic. On the one hand, YES, new material to read! On the other, WHAT? How did I miss the rest of this?
In any case, after rereading DWLF (which was just as lovely the second time around), I determined that I must now read this one through from start to finish. And I know I'm gonna love ever minute.
Author's Response: Haha, glad you got around to it! I am terrible for starting to read something then forgetting about or losing the book. :S I am so glad that found Mental again. Also - lovely to hear you're rereading DWLF. Goodness, I groan quite heavity if I try to re-read that one, given how far I've come in writing since. ;) I like to think I've improved ... Anyway - always nice hearing from you! Glad you are still enjoying the crazy stuff I've posted on this lovely site. - Whitetail
The best ever name for a story! And a very promising first chapter, too.
Author's Response: Thanks! Great to hear you find it promising!
The best ever name for a story! And a very promising first chapter, too.
Author's Response: Thanks, other witch!
| Title: September: The Beginning of an Ending
| 20 Mar 2014 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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this was confusing
Author's Response: Well, it was meant to get you asking questions! It will make sense in time. Thanks for the review!
I wonder what the Daily Prophet said that has the train engineer making apologies.
Author's Response: Indeed? Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: September: The Beginning of an Ending
| 18 Feb 2014 6:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start thank you
Author's Response: Good to hear you are enjoying it!
The drivers response to Harry was interesting. You gave us an idea of what was coming in the intoduction but I look forward to finding out what the back story is.
Author's Response: Hmm, yes ... I had fun with this opening. Thanks for reviewing!
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