Potions and Snitches
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Title: A Cracked Mirror 16 Sep 2014 9:14 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story. I like the way Hermione reacted and I wonder if Ron is gonna be supportive or if he's gonna be a jerk about it.
    I like Snape, the prankster. The goat incident was hilarious.

    Author's Response: Thanks, the other witch! Yeah, who knows, right? Thanks for reviewing!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 15 Jun 2014 6:11 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    So the penny has finally dropped for Snape. He's going to have to work hard to get Harry to trust him, but at least it'll give him something to work towards and probably help him at the same time. Harry does seem to be making progress - a big step to admit that things aren't fine to one of his best friends instead of just people in the unit.

    Author's Response: Yes, a big step for Harry indeed! Thanks for the review!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 14 Jun 2014 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, good thoughts abouty the signs, the training ideas are good

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 11 Jun 2014 3:45 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I didn't get the notification for this again :( Great chapter though. Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Those naughty notifications ... maybe Umbridge intercepted it? I thought they fixed that - oh well, maybe drop a line in the shout box. Good to hear you got here eventually though and that you're enjoying it!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 11 Jun 2014 1:17 am
Reviewer: aj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, been following religiously , I love it :)

    Author's Response: It is awesome to hear that you have been following TSWWM! Thanks a lot for dropping a line and letting me know you've been enjoying it. :)
Title: A Cracked Mirror 09 Jun 2014 5:21 am
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I never want to harangue an author for chapters, but it is hard waiting from week to week for this story. I love the narrative shifts between the two characters. I like adolescent, mischievous Severus and this more adult-but-broken side as well. It's also great to get Harry's more resilient perspective.

    Author's Response: Hello, Quynce! Well, a little bit of haranging for new chapters, as you put it, can be a nice indicator of the enjoyment level readers are getting from a story! I am so glad that you are enjoying the story, as well as the overall style with the narrative shifts. That has been a fun challenge to write. Thanks for your feedback regarding the characterizations as well. Always nice to hear people's impressions! I'll keep those weekly updates coming. Cheers. :)
Title: A Cracked Mirror 09 Jun 2014 4:32 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Impresionante!!

    Me encanta como Severus ha sacado conclusiones, además de que es sumamente triste ver el desglose de Severus por su propio pasado

    es triste que sepa tanto de abuso al haber sido abusado,

    más como lo muestra

    Author's Response: Hola, Kendra. Muchas gracias por la revisión!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 09 Jun 2014 2:02 am
Reviewer: Abie (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for a awesome chapter! The conversation with Hermione was spot-on. Great job. And finally! Snape opens his eyes! I've been waiting for that. I loved the way you had the idea of Harry being an abuse victim gradually enter Snape's awareness while he listed the symptoms in general terms. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

    Author's Response: Howdy! You are most welcome for the chapter, and thank you for taking the time to let me know what you thought. Great to hear that you loved the method by which Snape realized Harry's abuse. I enjoyed writing that part. I look forward to sharing what happens next as well!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 09 Jun 2014 12:59 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ow, this is so amazing I'm really looking forward to the next one

    Author's Response: Nice to hear from you again, crotia. Thanks for the enthusiasm!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 09 Jun 2014 12:40 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love Snape's thoughts.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Lili! Wonderful to hear you liked Severus' thoughts.

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