I like that Harry called Hermione. Very good chapter.
| Title: Calling Out
| 29 Jun 2014 8:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good chapter I loved the way you wrote about his confusion and panic attack
Author's Response: Great to hear you are enjoying it still, Fmh. :)
| Title: Calling Out
| 28 Jun 2014 3:21 am
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| Reviewer: Liz (Anonymous)
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Hi, just wanted to let you know I am enjoying this story. You are really good at finding the right words for a situation and having the restraint not to over-explain anything. Great work, looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Liz! It is awesome to know that you feel things aren't over explained. It can be so hard not to hammer thoughts into the heads of readers, because it is hard to know what others get and what they don't because you know the story back to front. Thanks a lot for that useful piece of feedback. Cheers!
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| 27 Jun 2014 5:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous)
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Just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story, it's very realistic and I'm really enjoying reading it. It's also finally inspired me to help my mum weed the garden which I've been putting off for weeks.
Author's Response: Hi! Wow, I am so glad tha you are really enjoying TSWWM and feel it is realistic. That is awesome to hear that you were inspired to help weed! Sometimes the simplest things can be the hardest to keep up with, and can seem so impossible when you're feeling under the weather - at least it's that way for me! Thanks so much for the review!
Yeah talking about stupid things really helps doesn't it?
Oh well, I hope this means your feeling better cause you've posted again.
Author's Response: Yes, it is strange how the dumbest conversations can really get you out of a bad place! And yes, I am feeling better. Thanks so much for the review, crotia! Unfortunately, my own summer will be a bit mental, and life is going to be super busy for me so I will try to keep regular updates but it won't always happen. :S Cheers!
I rather enjoyed the whole chapter from Harry's POV, and it was great progress that he managed to use Hermione to help him. Oh, and while I really appreciate your regular updates don't ever feel obliged to stick to a schedule - enjoy the summer break.
Author's Response: Howdy, rosina! Great to hear you thought this chapter was nice from Harry's POV. Thank you for the kindness regarding a busy schedule. I tend to do it more for my own sake than readers sometimes, just to get my lazy butt writing, haha! But on occasion life gets busy. Nice to know somebody doesn't mind waiting! Cheers.
so glad to see Harry making some progress, learning some coping mechanisms! Also, I love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words and thoughts! Cheers!
| Title: Calling Out
| 26 Jun 2014 5:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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Beautiful chapter. It was great to see Harry call Hermione instead of hurting himself, and his response to it was very realistic. I can't wait til Harry and Snape talk.
Author's Response: Hi again, Abie! Good to hear your thoughts, and it is nice to know that you feel this chapter was realistic. That is what I am going for, so hearing that makes my day. Yeah, I look forward to Snape and Harry talking too! Cheers!
Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Good to hear from you, cara-tanaka. :)
| Title: Calling Out
| 26 Jun 2014 7:37 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This chapter was great! Definitely worth the wait. Harry is making progress, slowly but surely. I quite like how you described him distracting himself and using his strategies when he felt the urge to cut.
Author's Response: Hey, Lili. Wonderful to hear you enjoyed Harry's strategy to avoid hurting himself. Distraction is key! I am so happy to hear it was worth the wait. I wasn't really sure what to think of this chapter when I posted it!
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