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Title: Together, We Fall 08 Mar 2017 1:11 pm
Reviewer: Kiromenanz (Signed) [Report This]
    this is so beautiful, this chapter is the third time you made me cry with this story. it's amazing, and thank you so much for writing it
Title: Together, We Fall 09 Sep 2015 6:42 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I believe is about where I was when I last began reading this story. Ah, poor Harry and Severus - but so good that they are coming to know that they are not alone. Such an important realization. I am eager to see what happens next, so I shall continue forward!

    Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Dream. :)
Title: Together, We Fall 18 Oct 2014 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well written thank you so much

    Author's Response: You are most welcome, Fmh!
Title: Together, We Fall 11 Oct 2014 10:01 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I just love how realistic and believable your writing is, I went through a time in my life when I was younger when I felt like I was going to die, just like how you described Snape's life, and I was like, "Yes, that's exactly how it felt." I didn't know how, or when, but I felt like I was going to die soon, I even wrote out a list of small things I wanted to do before I died. I wasn't being abused, but my life wasn't going anywhere, I never left the house, never had any friends, and each day was the same, sad, bleakness I'd come to expect. Nothing to look forward to, and I was just waiting to die.
    Thank you for putting it more eloquently than I could, and thank you for writing this chapter! It was terrific.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much, Scorpia for sharing your thoughts and experience. It is amazing how many people share the experiences I have been putting into this story. What is most heartening to me is that despite the difficult times it is obvious many have suffered, they are still here. That speaks of something, whether it courage or the ability to adapt, or something else that cannot be named. Again, thank you for putting your own thoughts into words. It is difficult to move on after such a difficult period. I am glad that you are here to put words to that time in your life, as I have done so through my own writing. Hugs, Whitetail.
Title: Together, We Fall 06 Oct 2014 11:46 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a sad ending to the chapter. I hope someone gets the chance to cast a Flea-Biting jinx at that awful dog...

    Author's Response: Ha ... flea biting jinx ... excellent! Yes, it was a sad ending to a chapter. I felt a little cruel writing it ... Thanks for the review, shadow!
Title: Together, We Fall 02 Oct 2014 5:02 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    This is the best chapter ever. From the beginning to the end the very best. Exceptional, fluent and moving. Wonderful to read.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I am so glad you feel this one was the best chapter yet. I've been worrying that this story is losing its vigour as of late despite my hard work. Thank you so much for your encouraging words!
Title: Together, We Fall 01 Oct 2014 3:43 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm still angry at harry and severus' impotence against the press and the narritive that will follow them forever, all due to an asshole with entitlement issues and self-serving gossip mongers.

    My heart breaks for them but I'm happy harry was in a safe place to break down.

    Author's Response: I do rather hate that Auror ... and I can't even blame someone else because I wrote him, haha! Well if you hate him then my job is done, haha! Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Together, We Fall 30 Sep 2014 10:02 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor guys :( hope this brings them closer together :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, definitely a rough go for them. Thanks for the review!
Title: Together, We Fall 29 Sep 2014 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I started reading your fic two days ago and I'm all caught up now! :D Can't wait for more! I really like Harry and Severus's interaction with each other I hope they'll get better.

    Author's Response: Wow, glad to hear you're enjoying it Fairner! More will come. Probably in two weeks or so, depending on how much writing time I get! Thanks for the review. :)
Title: Together, We Fall 28 Sep 2014 11:51 pm
Reviewer: kazetoame (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I must admit, reading this story is like getting a glimpse of my own thoughts through the eyes of some of my favorite characters that leaves me crying for them. This is wonderfully written and so realistic it hurts. I am begging for a happy ending, but I know it will be a hard and long road. Concerning this chapter, couldn't they sue? I want them to, I want the Daily Prophet to feel humiliation like no other for airing information to the public that it has no business knowing. I want the assholes behind the fire to know the full wrath of Severus Snape and Albus Dumbledore (who I do see as a man only trying to help and protect two young men who he loves with all he has). Now, I feel for Ron, poor kid, he just wants to help, but doesn't know how. Hopefully, he gets in contact with Harry soon. Harry is going to need him and Hermione. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Hi kazetoame! Thanks so much for this long and detailed review!  A lawsuit does seem like a good choice, definitely. I am glad you see Dumbledore as helpful - I rather dislike the idea that he is nothing but uncaring and manipulative. Thanks again for rsharing your intriguing thoughts, and I hope you continue to t enjoy the story!

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