Really moving chapter, thank you.
Seriously, I have a question about the "box of hand-knitted tea" -- I thought you might have missed something in a revision, or else it was a weird typo of some sort. I'd like to know what was really in the box! :-D
Author's Response: OOOH I thought you made the typo in the review! It's supposed to be tea TOWELS! Thanks shadow - I'll go fix it! Haha ... oops
| Title: Burial Shrouds
| 12 Mar 2015 3:52 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Er... Kitten Tibbles hid a piece of fish in a box of hand-knitted tea? *giggles* There's a story there, I can tell!!! But seriously, great chapter. The photo album kind of unlocked the door, and I loved the sad irony when Harry told the album/Sirius that it/he would be safe in the attic, when Sirius would have made Harry safe from the Dursleys. Hot chocolate and scones... Ahhhhh! ;-)
Author's Response: Hi Shadow! Haha, glad you liked the cat story! I figured with as many cats as Mrs Figg has, something crazy was bound to happen eventually! I am very glad you enjoyed the chapter, and the photo album scene. Hmm, you know what, I didn't completely draw parallels between Harry telling the album/Sirius it would be safe in the attic, and Sirius being the one to promise Harry safety. This is why I love hearing from readers. They catch things I don't even fully notice, and often instill their own meaning which is the most beautiful thing in storytelling. Cheers, Shadow! Next chapter should be up fairly soon now the sit is up again.
| Title: Burial Shrouds
| 05 Mar 2015 11:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lump in the throat time! Wonderful chapter thank you
Author's Response: Thanks, Fmh!
| Title: Burial Shrouds
| 03 Mar 2015 12:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Signed)
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Wonderful
Author's Response: Thanks Lili!
great chapter please update soon i really love this story :)
Author's Response: I'll try to update as soon as I can, haha! Unfortunately it often requires me to cheat on my original novel ... eek. But I'll do my best!
Really good chapter. It must have done Harry good to get all the emotion out, and how much progress has been made that he was able to answer Severus' questions, and that Severus was able to handle the situation so well.
Author's Response: Thanks, rosina! I am glad you enjoyed seeing how far they've come.
Poor Harry and Severus, im glad they have each other and sooooo hope tht Harry doesn't freak out when Severus tells him about the part he played during the 1st war :)
Author's Response: Yeah, it would be a shame for them to sever the bond they've created, huh? Thanks a lot for the review!
Another very well-handled chapter! :-)
Author's Response: Glad you think so, cckeimig!
Beautiful chapter. Poor Harry. Good job Severus. Thank you so much for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks Jan! Glad to hear you thought the chapter was beautiful. You are most welcome for the update, and thanks for the review!
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