| Title: September: The Beginning of an Ending
| 05 Oct 2022 10:33 am
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| Reviewer: Gryphonia (Signed)
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| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 05 Mar 2022 1:24 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Your story was raw and moving. There isn’t enough written about mental health and I love how your story was written with such care and compassion towards the characters.
Really moving chapter, thank you.
Dark, painful, and human - your descriptors for Harry’s glimpse into the inner world of Snape, but so perfectly descriptive of your whole story itself.
I loved this chapter. I’m glad for Snape’s honesty, and love the connection that’s forming between Harry and Snape.
I love the idea of their images cracking and falling away. This story is very raw, anguished, and powerful.
I really love the idea of a course for professors on spotting abuse. There needs to be more awareness around these issues. Terrific chapter.
I really enjoyed the ground quidditch, and Harry meeting others his age.
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