| Title: Lay Down Your Arms
| 10 Apr 2015 7:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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So awesome those two (for me new) chapters:)!! I am glad Harry forgave Severus. don't want this to end though... Looking forward to much more:)!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Anna!
| Title: Lay Down Your Arms
| 24 Mar 2015 9:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter as always, I love the kitchen scenes
Author's Response: You're welcome! I am glad you enjoyed the chapter.
| Title: Lay Down Your Arms
| 24 Mar 2015 12:52 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Great update!
Author's Response: Thanks, BlueWater5!
Awww glad Harry understood enough about Severus to not push him away :)
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the review!
| Title: Lay Down Your Arms
| 23 Mar 2015 7:57 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Oh boy... This chapter really blows my mind! I can't believe what a superb job you did, discussing Snape's not being sure that Harry had completely forgiven him, Harry not being certain he'd really meant it, and the investment of trust. One subject alone would be tough to write, but you handled all three beautifully, AFTER writing the forgivness scene, which had me all teary-eyed and sniffling! Whoa! Way to go, Whitetail!
Author's Response: Haha, heck, your review blows my mind too. ;) I was really unsure about what I thought of this chapter, so it's really awesome to hear you appreciated it. It's fantastic to hear you enjoyed both Snape and Harry's thoughts, and felt that the forgiveness scene had an emotional impact. Your feedback on that is really helpful, as it's hard to know sometimes what will resonate with the reader. Thanks a lot, Shadow! Cheers!
Seriously, I have a question about the "box of hand-knitted tea" -- I thought you might have missed something in a revision, or else it was a weird typo of some sort. I'd like to know what was really in the box! :-D
Author's Response: OOOH I thought you made the typo in the review! It's supposed to be tea TOWELS! Thanks shadow - I'll go fix it! Haha ... oops
| Title: Lay Down Your Arms
| 23 Mar 2015 7:47 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I loved it. Great chapter! Its wonderful how mature Harry is, how much growth both of them are making. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: You're welcome. I'm glad you liked the chapter. :)
Awesome! One of your better chapters overall.
Author's Response: Thanks cckeimig!
| Title: Burial Shrouds
| 12 Mar 2015 3:52 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Er... Kitten Tibbles hid a piece of fish in a box of hand-knitted tea? *giggles* There's a story there, I can tell!!! But seriously, great chapter. The photo album kind of unlocked the door, and I loved the sad irony when Harry told the album/Sirius that it/he would be safe in the attic, when Sirius would have made Harry safe from the Dursleys. Hot chocolate and scones... Ahhhhh! ;-)
Author's Response: Hi Shadow! Haha, glad you liked the cat story! I figured with as many cats as Mrs Figg has, something crazy was bound to happen eventually! I am very glad you enjoyed the chapter, and the photo album scene. Hmm, you know what, I didn't completely draw parallels between Harry telling the album/Sirius it would be safe in the attic, and Sirius being the one to promise Harry safety. This is why I love hearing from readers. They catch things I don't even fully notice, and often instill their own meaning which is the most beautiful thing in storytelling. Cheers, Shadow! Next chapter should be up fairly soon now the sit is up again.
| Title: Burial Shrouds
| 05 Mar 2015 11:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lump in the throat time! Wonderful chapter thank you
Author's Response: Thanks, Fmh!
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