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Reviews For Fade
Title: The Other Team 15 Jun 2014 3:52 am
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story, but my heart breaks for Harry. Will there be any back story about how Snape came to be his father? I went back to the first chapter and summary thinking maybe I had missed a chapter.
    Its so frustrating for all the adults around Harry seeming not to care about his treatment or emotional welfare, so it was great to see a glimmer from Hooch, maybe she can be a friendly ear? Loving those quick updates as it has got me completely involved!
Title: The Other Team 15 Jun 2014 12:55 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well written story. I am enjoying it very much and you depict Harry's troubles very well.
Title: The Other Team 15 Jun 2014 12:24 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapters! This story is great!
Title: The Other Team 14 Jun 2014 7:32 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! He can't get a break can he?

    I'm hoping that Snape comes around eventually and accepts Harry at least as his son.

    Great chapter and will miss this story when it's finished. I like a younger Harry.
Title: The Other Team 14 Jun 2014 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Bones (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no, he received detention! Is Thomas going to kick him off the team?? I like Thomas by the way. :)

    Author's Response: No he won't get kicked off the team.  The rule is no detention three weeks before a game or they don't play in that game.  There were no games scheduled at the time so Harry was good.
Title: The Other Team 14 Jun 2014 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    Somehow I don't think Harry will succeed... or more like I think he will, but Snape will take few or even 1 point from him just to not let him win and this will crack poor boy.
Title: The Other Team 14 Jun 2014 5:50 pm
Reviewer: Sad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    At the rate he is going, I think harry will earn the 50, however, his prize will be a let down. I see it along the lines of what the Dursleys gave him for Christmas.

    Your story is fantastic!!!! :)
Title: The Other Team 14 Jun 2014 2:53 pm
Reviewer: C (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story and you are on a role with updates. Looking forward to the next one.
Title: The Other Team 14 Jun 2014 2:50 pm
Reviewer: JB (Anonymous) [Report This]
    3 updates on this story and 2 on the other from my favorite author! Is it Christmas??? I like how you used Madam Hooch as a go to person for Harry, one doesn't usually see her in the stories too much beyond Quidditch games!
Title: The Other Team 14 Jun 2014 11:56 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope you update soon!

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