I feel so bad for Harry...he has lost everything and just wants to be accepted for who he is, by his new AND old Houses. All he has left is the hope that he can earn at least his father's positive attention.....
aw, that's so nice of madam Hooch
I get what you mean good character development
I really love Severus as a character...really do...I hate him right now...god I hate him ..
| Title: The Other Team
| 15 Jun 2014 11:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I think he may crack but even if he gets the point I'm not sure he will get the kind of present he's hoping for! Good chter thank you
| Title: A Plan
| 15 Jun 2014 10:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lump in the throat time! Very well written and good story thank you
| Title: Alone
| 15 Jun 2014 10:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry! Lovely lot of angst and well written with all IC! Please could we know how Harry found out about S ever us being his father
Good story so far. Poor Harry though - its hard to imagine being so desperate that even Snape (when he's acting like a pig) seems like an asset. Here's hoping he recognises Harry's hard work and starts to act like a father regardless of how many points the child gains.
| Title: The Other Team
| 15 Jun 2014 1:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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I am torn apart by your story. I am sure you will come up with a good explanation for Snape`s beastly behaviour but it is hard to watch Harry suffer so. I am thoroghly hooked, thank you!
| Title: The Other Team
| 15 Jun 2014 4:08 am
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| Reviewer: eclipse (Anonymous)
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This is exciting, looking forward to your next chapter :)
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