Great story, but my heart breaks for Harry. Will there be any back story about how Snape came to be his father? I went back to the first chapter and summary thinking maybe I had missed a chapter.
Its so frustrating for all the adults around Harry seeming not to care about his treatment or emotional welfare, so it was great to see a glimmer from Hooch, maybe she can be a friendly ear? Loving those quick updates as it has got me completely involved!
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| 15 Jun 2014 12:55 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Well written story. I am enjoying it very much and you depict Harry's troubles very well.
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| 15 Jun 2014 12:24 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Great chapters! This story is great!
Poor Harry! He can't get a break can he?
I'm hoping that Snape comes around eventually and accepts Harry at least as his son.
Great chapter and will miss this story when it's finished. I like a younger Harry.
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| 14 Jun 2014 7:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Bones (Anonymous)
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Oh no, he received detention! Is Thomas going to kick him off the team?? I like Thomas by the way. :)
Author's Response: No he won't get kicked off the team. The rule is no detention three weeks before a game or they don't play in that game. There were no games scheduled at the time so Harry was good.
Somehow I don't think Harry will succeed... or more like I think he will, but Snape will take few or even 1 point from him just to not let him win and this will crack poor boy.
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| 14 Jun 2014 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Sad (Anonymous)
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At the rate he is going, I think harry will earn the 50, however, his prize will be a let down. I see it along the lines of what the Dursleys gave him for Christmas.
Your story is fantastic!!!! :)
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| 14 Jun 2014 2:53 pm
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| Reviewer: C (Anonymous)
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Great story and you are on a role with updates. Looking forward to the next one.
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| 14 Jun 2014 2:50 pm
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| Reviewer: JB (Anonymous)
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3 updates on this story and 2 on the other from my favorite author! Is it Christmas??? I like how you used Madam Hooch as a go to person for Harry, one doesn't usually see her in the stories too much beyond Quidditch games!
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| 14 Jun 2014 11:56 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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