| Title: Storm of Fire
| 20 Jul 2014 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter I loved your use of fire and water as purifying elements.
Have you tried "Three Slytherin Marauders" very long andWIP but very good and often quite funny.
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 09 Jul 2014 1:02 am
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| Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous)
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I just read this story and love it. It's been a while since I've come across one that hooked me so thoroughly. I love your Harry, and your Snape is viscerally believable. I really do hope you continue it. The story deserves it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you like my story. I am most certainly continuing it, I've just been a bit held up for the past couple of weeks. I should be updating any day now. (And from your review, I learned that visceral has a double meaning ;)
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 25 Jun 2014 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Ladylike (Anonymous)
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I'm impressed. Didn't think there were any more fics this good to find. Thank you for proving me wrong.
I really like how you seemingly on random create new directions for the story to go in.
Personally I believe this story has potential to be great. That you have potential to be great. I do hope you'll continue to update.
Take care
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 25 Jun 2014 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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another great chapter... A little too suggestive ending, but I hope that Harry won't become too depressed and won't start cutting or trying to kill himself - hopefully Severus will stop him.
And help him to recover
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 25 Jun 2014 1:26 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I really enjoy this story line - Harry's in so much turmoil!! Can't wait for more - very well written and deep! Poor Harry!
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 25 Jun 2014 12:58 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I liked the contrast of fire and water if reflected the contrast of Harry's mood thank you. A good story that is completed is "Eight" try it if you haven't read it.
A cliffhanger?!
Really?!
OK, I'll tell you anything if you just please continue.
Maybe they should use your story in the mafia to extract information.
XD
But seriously this is amazing and I really want to know how this continues
Author's Response: Wow, what a compliment! lol. Your review made me laugh :). Don't worry, I have no plans of stopping now, and I'll be updating pretty soon. (And cliffies are fun. You think this one was bad, wait till the next one I have planned. Mwahahahaha)
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 24 Jun 2014 3:21 am
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| Reviewer: jordana (Anonymous)
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I thought I read most of the stories on this site, but this one is particularly well done. You strike a good median between harshness and real in your depictions of the abuse and the characters something like that might result in. I hope Snape figures out what is disconcerting him soon--don't draw it out too much please.
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 23 Jun 2014 6:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Thank you for another fab chapter!! I'm loving the rapport Snape and Harry are slowly building up, particularly with the increasingly parental attitude Snape is taking towards Harry. However, one thing I really didn't like with this chapter was Harry's horribly elitist views towards school. He's clearly intelligent but he seems to think this makes everyone else stupid and school a "warehouse for idiots". Just because they're not on his level doesn't mean they don't deserve to be educated. (equality rant over) But other than that it was great!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think. About Harry's attitude, I did deliberately make his view toward school seem arrogant. Not because he's arrogant as a person, but as a defense mechanism. His whole life, he'd been shunned by his family and school-mates for being freaky, abnormal etc., and, after a while, Harry gave up on trying to win approval and held himself apart, viewing those who hurt him with disdain. And furthermore, as much as he tries to seem aloof and uncaring, he really is very insecure, so the disproportionate irritation towards those who are not as smart as him is a classic sign of insecurity. I do not in any way condone such an attitude, I just think that his view is realistic under the circumstances. Thanks for pointing that out, I'm glad I got a chance to explain :) Responding to your comment actually made me examine Harry's behavior more deeply than I had originally done.
| Title: Storm of Fire
| 23 Jun 2014 12:41 pm
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| Reviewer: FanFicFan (Anonymous)
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Hi, just read your new chapter and I really liked it. I am so looking forward to the next chapter, the update of your Fic is the one I await most eagerly, because you take your time to develop your characters and do not rush things. I am always eager to know what will happen next.
BTW: I think this is only my 2nd posted review ever, so it tells how much I like your story and want you to continue posting it.
Greetings from Austria
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, that's a real compliment. :)
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