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Title: A Way Out 20 Jul 2014 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very disturbing but that shows how well it was written, thank you so much for a tense chapter
Title: A Way Out 20 Jul 2014 9:30 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    You have completely captured the actions and thought processes of an abused kid. Lack of trust and suspicion and confusion are so eloquently captured. Very well done and i can't wait for more!
Title: A Way Out 16 Jul 2014 2:19 pm
Reviewer: Kallie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi, I really love this story. Please update now that that submission are allowed again!
Title: A Way Out 16 Jul 2014 9:12 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Why is Harry being so damn despicable. People call Severus the greasy git but right now Harry is the one with the issues and being the git. I am kind of getting frustrated with him.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, I know Harry is acting irritating, but think about it: he's a traumatized, depressed, suicidal ten year old who's lashing out at Snape because he feels safe. Harry is not even aware of why he's doing it, but when a person is in that much pain, they have to let it out somehow, or they'll implode. And the average teenager acts the same way Harry is right now, and most of them are not traumatized and damaged the way he is.
Title: A Way Out 15 Jul 2014 6:13 pm
Reviewer: Paradigm (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, didn't you promise to update soon?=)
    Last chapter was amazing, can't wait to read next one:)

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, I did say I would update soon, but the cite is currently preventing submissions due the the recents problems. I WILL update as soon as the cite allows me to. Hang in there; I'm glad you liked the chapter :)
Title: A Way Out 15 Jul 2014 4:28 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! How could it *not* end there? You write more words after it in the same file.... Really, this is just evil. I make it a policy to not demand chapters, but the author brought this on herself-- next chapter, please!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, yes, I am simply evil personified. Worse than Voldemort ;p. I WILL be posting as soon as possible, but, unfortunately, the cite is preventing us from posting right now due to the recent issues, so hopefully everything will be cleared up soon. :) Hang in there!
Title: A Way Out 11 Jul 2014 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally an update!! Although, I suppose, this chapter was worth the wait :) and wow, the corner scene was great, it conveyed lots of...hm, feels? I could literally feel Harry's fear and anxiety! Just...wow :) yet, I feel like Harry's thinking is a bit advanced for his age, this story is set pre-hog warts, yes? Anywho, keep up the good work, as usual and please update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter. :) Yes, Harry's thinking is advanced for his age, which is my intention. I'm trying to portray him as highly intelligent, both through experience and natural ability, yet emotionally, he's not all that advanced. You see that often in highly intelligent children, even those who haven't been horribly abused.

Title: A Way Out 11 Jul 2014 9:13 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Impresionante forma de describir la depresión de Harry, como se va confundiendo, y sin duda el suave interés de Severus es precioso, espero que pueda llegar a tiempo y realmente encontrar una fisura en la armadura de Harry para que pueda ayudarlo con todo lo que le esta pasando

    en fin

    gran capítulo

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I love google translate...
Title: A Way Out 11 Jul 2014 3:27 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry. Did Snape notice nothing amiss over the last several days? Or was Harry too far gone to notice him noticing?

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, Snape did notice, but Harry, as you said, was too far gone to realize. I did try to show that Snape noticed through the short scene where Snape tells Harry he looks unwell, etc.
Title: A Way Out 11 Jul 2014 12:53 am
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    it's really great - the growing tension.. you've described it so well. But cliffie in moment as that? You're evil ! :)

    I cannot wait for next chapter.
    I hope Severus will be able to help Harry...

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, I know I'm evil, and I make no apologies for it ;p. Stick around, the next chapter will be up soon.

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