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I have read my share of Severus/Harry stories. I have no hesitation when I say yours is the best story I have read. It is just completely and utterly wonderful. Your Harry is the most realistic representation for how one should think, feel and act in response to an upbringing such as his. The way your Severus handles Harry's situation is perfect. The way you brought these two together was breathtaking. I am in complete awe of this story. Everything about it is fantastic. Your vocabulary is extraordinary. It was just a joy to read. Thank you so much for writing this. I do hope that you continue it to completion. Author's Response: Thank you so much. Sorry you lost sleep over the story, though ;) I truly appreciate your feedback, it's always amazing to hear from happy readers. I do fully intend to finish the story, but with my semester just beginning (I do not recommend taking microbiology and anatomy simultaneously) it might take longer than I'd like. Thanks again.
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Also thank you for writing with good grammar and spelling. Nothing distracts me from a good story more than poor spelling and common grammatical errors. You are awesome! Keep up the good work! I hope to read what's next soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you like my portrayal of Harry; drastically altering the personality of a much-beloved character is risky business ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! The coming Dumbledore scene is definitely satisfying, in my opinion ;)
I just read all the chapters, so I guess I'll just leave my general impressions about the characters and such. I think you've found a nice way to depict Snape. Usually he grows too soft on fics, but you've managed to keep him perceptive and stern enough that I can still picture him being as mean as he generally is in Hogwarts. As for Harry, I guess because he doesn't have the usual innocence, he seems more Slytherin then usual (or maybe just less Gryffindor), but that’s alright. I do find him a bit too smart and curious. However I’m more than willing to go along with it as it allows for all the scientific background plus this intelligence based connection/relationship and the interesting conversations between the two of them. For some reason I cringe every time Dumbledore shows up. I guess it's because Harry hates him so much and I can't help but feel he is too stupid for not having realized all that was going on. While he is a very "anything for the greater good” kind of character, this is so dumb I feel like there’s reason to agree with Harry on that conspiracy theory of his. About this chapter, it is very nice. It feels like the end of something, beginning of another stage. I wonder how far you intend to go on the story. I imagine it would all be quite different, in Hogwarts and all, I’m curious. Anyway, just my first impressions. Sorry for the long text. I didn't really know what to write, but since you seem quite fond of reviews I'm trying to be encouraging. Well, happy holidays! Hope you write again soon =] Author's Response: Thank you so much! Don't apologize for a long review, I love it :) I really appreciate your feedback. I'm glad you like my portrayal of Snape; it isn't easy as he's such a complicated character. As for Harry, I had a bit too much fun with his superior intelligence (I may have overdone it a bit), but it's more interesting that way, I think. I really don't like reading Harry as too naive and gullible. I like him to have a mind of his own (plus I can go to town with all that scientific info). Yeah, Dumbledore is frustrating, but he really didn't intend to cause Harry harm. Too little, too late, though. Thanks again for your feedback, and I hope you enjoyed your holiday.
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