Yep, he wouldn't have made that binding potion, its usually what outcomes we can get. Muahahaha. Lovely story, very very lovely, I love it.
Well, Severus's heart swelled, I hope he doesn't have a cardiac arrest. Lovely chap!
Lalalalalalala! This story is making me jittery and giddy. Its written so well. I love it. Lets see what happens with the Dursleys.
The feels! The feels! I got the feels! I simply love this chapter. This is my second (or is it third) time reading this story. This is my fav chap.
So good to read this again.
Poor sweet Harry and Sevvie. *sniffles loudly*
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. The pacing worked well. I like how you had Harry reveal (slowly, and not all at once) how he was treated by the Dursleys. The ending works very well. Nicely done.
*applause* I loved this story, and the last scene was so appropriate! Of course, if you get an idea for a sequel, then by all means, do it. It does seem pretty well finished on its own though.
Author's Response: thank you!
Ah, bravo! I really enjoyed this piece. Poor Harry, though - my arms and shoulders ached in sympathy. I feel that you did a great job depicting this situation. It made for a satisfying read.
Author's Response: so glad you think so, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue
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Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh very nice I loved how you had sev get harry to write to him what happened.
Author's Response: Thanks so glad you liked it!!
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