I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. The pacing worked well. I like how you had Harry reveal (slowly, and not all at once) how he was treated by the Dursleys. The ending works very well. Nicely done.
*applause* I loved this story, and the last scene was so appropriate! Of course, if you get an idea for a sequel, then by all means, do it. It does seem pretty well finished on its own though.
Author's Response: thank you!
Ah, bravo! I really enjoyed this piece. Poor Harry, though - my arms and shoulders ached in sympathy. I feel that you did a great job depicting this situation. It made for a satisfying read.
Author's Response: so glad you think so, thanks for reading and reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue
| 14 Oct 2014 10:09 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh very nice I loved how you had sev get harry to write to him what happened.
Author's Response: Thanks so glad you liked it!!
oh do write a sequel it would be most interesting. PLEASE? PLEASE? PLEASE?
Author's Response: haha, I'll think about it! Life has gotten pretty crazy so I've hardly had time for my current projects, let alone starting a new one.
Wow! I didn't know how this site worked, so I didn't track the story, just favorited it... today, I went to my favorite stories and saw you had updated.. I re-read everything, and it still made me cry! I like the end of this story! :) thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you liked it so much! It's always good to hear! And I'm glad you liked the ending too. Thanks for reading and leaving a review to let me know!
I so enjoyed this.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!
| Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue
| 14 Aug 2014 1:00 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely ending thank you so much for a great story
Author's Response: thank you, I'm so glad you liked the story and the ending! thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
| 14 Aug 2014 12:55 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, a hard chapter I think but lovely without being too fluffy
Author's Response: thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!
| Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue
| 10 Aug 2014 12:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Evas (Anonymous)
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A very fluffy story, but nicely written still
Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you liked it! and yes, it is rather fluffy, as it turned out.
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