Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Fune ad Servendium
Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust 09 Jul 2014 6:08 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    So good!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 5: A Little Bit of Trust 09 Jul 2014 5:37 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you gave a timeline of the binding. I had wondered how far along Harry and Snape were in the process. Snape is doing a good job in gaining Harry's trust. Using the game is a good idea. It gives Harry something else to concentrate on while he is talking.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so!
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas 05 Jul 2014 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Gianne von Ellewile (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is amazing chapter of wonderful story. I ejoyed reading it. I hope that next chapter will be there very soon :). Have a good time.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I am working on the current chapter, it should be out fairly soon. Life just got significantly more busy lately.
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas 29 Jun 2014 11:40 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like your story very much :)

    The initial idea was brilliant.. and interactions between Severus and Harry - sometimes priceless.. :)

    I hope to read next chapters.

    Author's Response: thank you, it's good to hear!
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas 25 Jun 2014 10:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much a very well written chapter. Loved the Christmas presents and of course how Severus handled the abuse revelations, still rather IC.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas 25 Jun 2014 10:47 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh lovely quiet christmas :)

    Author's Response: of course! haha
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas 25 Jun 2014 7:25 pm
Reviewer: emily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So happy for the many updates and hope more are coming. I appreciate your Severus development, but feel like you could give more weight and time to the harry development. Don't rely on the readers prior experience with harry in the canon books. Really help to develop your own portrayal of harry you want for this story.

    Author's Response: thanks for the advice, it's helpful!
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas 24 Jun 2014 6:54 am
Reviewer: Arwen_Evenstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far! I really enjoy your long chapters. Thanks for all the frequent updates too. Keep up the good work! :D

    Author's Response: thank you! I plan to keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas 23 Jun 2014 10:48 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you,
    a new chapter and such a long one at that!

    Author's Response: you're welcome, thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas 23 Jun 2014 10:47 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Gosh, updates are coming along very quickly. I think you are doing a good job of putting your own twist on a fairly familiar story, and I like the way you are writing the characters. It's nice to see a sympathetic but not mushy Snape, and to see Harry still a bit cheeky.

    Author's Response: thank you! I appreciate it!

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