I cried at the abuse and laughed at the letter. So I ended with a smile. All in all awesome chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it! Good to know I am tugging on the heartstrings with a little humor thrown in.
lol that's one way to shut someone up shove the spoon of food into it. Wow Snape is proving himself wrong in many ways but that will change again we all know how his mind works....well when it comes to Harry that is.
Author's Response: haha yes, shoving food into someone's mouth would shut them up. thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas
| 23 Jun 2014 9:24 pm
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Reviewer: Yondi (Signed)
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Great story so far and great chapter as well! I like the way you portray Harry and Sev, the whole idea of the potion and its effects... everything! Can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It's good to hear! The next update will not be as rapid as the first few were, but I anticipate a week or two.
Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to Snape's Quarters
| 23 Jun 2014 9:16 pm
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Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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Snape is seeing a different Harry a little bit. He still thinks of him as a spoiled brat bu im sure that will change soon. I hope Wow I am behind on your chapters and reviews so onto the next :)
Author's Response: haha, yes I have been updating pretty quickly right now!
Yes...I knew it...but then again..most stories with Dursely Abuse have it..I love it when Sev finds out..Good job btw
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! It is somewhat predictable, but it just fits too well..
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas
| 23 Jun 2014 6:47 am
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Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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Great chapter! I was really happy to see that you posted 3 chapters at once. Very well-written and engaging.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I've ended up with quite a lot written lately.
I wondered how long it would be before Harry's abuse was noticed by Snape. With Harry's problem it was just a matter of time. I liked Snape's solution of having Harry write about the abuse. Sometimes writing things out is a good form of release and a good way for Harry to start to open up and let go.
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that was rather creative myself. I wanted Harry to start talking about things, but it just didn't feel like his character was ready.
Delightful story, really well written :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate it!
This story is great! I enjoy the subtle humor and your characterization of Harry and Snape. This is very creative and well written. I look forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate the compliments! I am glad you think it is coming out well!
Title: Chapter 3: Realizations
| 23 Jun 2014 1:20 am
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I really like the story and it's really original
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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