Such a shame this brilliant story was never completed.
I am totally unto this state ru. Please keep getting going!!!!!😀👍
Love this!! I like how Snape is still Snape, and yet...so different, in subtle ways. Much good. :0)
| Title: Chapter 2: St. Jerome Emiliani's Home for Children
| 24 Feb 2015 9:03 pm
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| Reviewer: sshpfanfiction (Signed)
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Very excited to see where this goes :).
| Title: Chapter 8: The Truth
| 19 Feb 2015 3:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Although I read, and reviewed, this chapter a couple of days ago I just wanted to add a little. The story and chapter are very good but re-reading the earlier ones I have realised that none of the three adults have asked any questions about the accident or why Harry ended up on the streets! This seems extraordinary to me and a bit of a hole in the plot. Also I'm sure Minerva would have wanted to meet Harry before this. This is just a suggestion and not a criticism of your wonderful story.
| Title: Chapter 8: The Truth
| 16 Feb 2015 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter, Severus is learning quickly! Can't wait for the next chapter and see how the magicical world reacts to Harry.
| Title: Chapter 7: Bartley O'Grady
| 16 Feb 2015 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for the map very helpful. I like Bartley I hope he is in it for longer as he could help Harry.
I'm really enjoying this story. The idea of Harry's extended touch is particularly interesting and I'm curious as to how Harry will go about learning magic.
I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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