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Title: Chapter Four 24 Jul 2014 12:06 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Me gusta que Severus comienza a darse cuenta que esta canalizando una forma de ser de Tobias Snape, quizás eso le haga reconsiderar su forma de ser

    y sin duda me preocupa, pero me emociona mucho, que Harry este todo ese indiferente a los estimulos,

    wow!!!

    suena a un sindrome de apego!!!!
Title: Chapter Three 20 Jul 2014 12:33 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting story but please can Harry be changed and bathed! A scene like that could be amusing!
Title: Chapter Two 20 Jul 2014 12:20 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok I'm worried! He has not changed or washed Harry yet!
Title: Chapter One 20 Jul 2014 12:06 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh so sad! Poor Harry and Severus thank you very well written!
Title: Prologue 19 Jul 2014 11:53 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a promising start
Title: Chapter Three 18 Jul 2014 6:04 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Es extraño este capítulo,

    es dulce que Harry tenga este apego con Severus, y este empezando a mostrar esa confianza tan inocente

    y Severus, bueno él cede en algunas cosas como en el lego, pero en otros es realmente un idiota

    en fin

    buen capítulo
Title: Chapter Three 16 Jul 2014 5:02 pm
Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh, poor baby Harry. Can't wait for next chapter
Title: Chapter One 09 Jul 2014 5:56 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh! Poor Snape...but at the same time I'm thinking, "Pick that baby up and LOVE HIM!" Hahaha, I work at a daycare so anything involving babies makes me get all protective. Great chapter!
Title: Prologue 09 Jul 2014 5:47 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad that plot bunny haunted you, lol! Thanks for sharing, cool first chapter, and well written too. :D
Title: Chapter One 07 Jul 2014 6:17 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Me encanta lo triste y oscuro que te esta saliendo este finc, es tan depresivo para los dos, para el pobre Harry y el pobre Severus,

    en realidad me encanta,

    gracias por el capítulo largo,

    fue hermoso

    Author's Response: Gracias por el comentario, usted hizo que mi día!

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