| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 25 Aug 2023 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Brent needs to get what’s coming to him. He’s awful and he knows it. I like that Draco has a conscience. The window spell is a clever idea.
| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 12 Aug 2014 4:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter. I like how you portray Draco
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, it means a lot to me, :) Thank you, I have a feeling he might be difficult to write later on, and don't get me started on Snape, :D
| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 08 Aug 2014 1:48 am
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| Reviewer: JTCM (Signed)
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Greatgreatgreat, please update!
^^
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it, :) Thank you for taking time to review!
| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 05 Aug 2014 4:43 am
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| Reviewer: emily (Anonymous)
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I appreciate the subtlety of nuance and character development you have in your writing. Nothing is overly heavy handed, especially between harry and his relatives. I really like that. Its a very good balance. I also enjoy that your chapters are long so we as a reader have time to really get into the story. I look forward to your next chapter...hope its soon.
Author's Response: Wow, your detailed review was just the thing to get me out of my little case of writer's block, :) Thank you so very much for taking the time to review, I appreciate it a lot and am very glad you are enjoying the story so far!
| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 04 Aug 2014 10:33 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I think he is a psychopath because he wasn't given enough love in his first 3 years and after that everyone became to despise him due to his psychopathyness
Author's Response: He's certainly a revengeful sort, ^_^ Thank you for taking time to review, I really appreciate it!
| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 04 Aug 2014 1:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Brent is a very sick puppy.
He has the makings of a serial killer. Very scary. I am very worried for Harry.
Hopefully Draco tells someone, and soon.
Very intriguing story-line--different from anything I've read before.
I can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response: Yes, he's got something a little off about him. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review, it means a lot to me! :D
| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 04 Aug 2014 12:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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I am looking forward to learn where you go with this story. Lovely start, thank you!
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for taking time to leave a review, it means a lot to me, :D
| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 04 Aug 2014 10:51 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This HAS to continue! Don't you dare abandon it! The plot line is so original and exciting, and I can't wait for the part where Snape steps in. :) I love the fact that you've taken the time to revise, the grammar is good and the sentences make sense (bad writing is an absolute story turn off for me) so please, keep this up and continue updating! :)
Author's Response: *Smile* Thanks for your encouraging words and for taking time to leave feedback, I really appreciate hearing your opinion! Snape will appear rather soon, I already have his stage entrance written, it's kind of funny, ^_^
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