| Title: Chapter 11: A Tentative Realization
| 26 Aug 2023 6:50 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That last line of the chapter was utterly brilliant. I’ve never seen that shift in mindset portrayed so strikingly.
I did.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, hope you enjoy the new chapter!
| Title: Chapter 11: A Tentative Realization
| 06 Dec 2017 10:59 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I loved, LOVED that last line. Fantastic chapter. I loved all the descriptions, Snape's thoughts, Harry's reactions, their communication. Just fabulous. And now Snape is starting to see. Love it. Your Snape is superb. And Harry is so in character, and not annoying at all. Just perfect.
Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for your incredibly kind review, it makes me so happy to know you've been enjoying the story. Hope you like the new chapter!
I hope that someone makes them all pay.
Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the new chapter! :)
| Title: Chapter 11: A Tentative Realization
| 13 May 2017 9:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sorry you are still in pain, thank you for updating great chapter and love how you are developing the characters
| Title: Chapter 11: A Tentative Realization
| 10 May 2017 12:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed)
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I adore this chapter. It's in no way forced and the characters are so honest. I love the way you write Harry. Not overly brave, not overly sensitive, just the right amount of self-sacrificing.
Loved Mrs. Weasley too.
The insight into characters motivations by the thought monologues that you provide are also brilliant!
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