| Title: Chapter 12: A Death to Biases
| 12 Dec 2017 9:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very intense wonderful chapter, thank you. Happy, belated, birthday greetings and thank you for updating
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review and birthday wishes! Hope you like the new chapter!
| Title: Chapter 8: A Hidden Aid
| 07 Dec 2017 10:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Yay! Go Harry and save the children! Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 7: A Dying Wish
| 07 Dec 2017 9:47 pm
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Wow very intense chapter. Poor Elizabeth what a dreadful death and why the cloak? Must have some magical powers. Thank you for a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 6: A Revengeful Plan
| 07 Dec 2017 9:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I seem to have missed this story for nearly a year! Not sure how this happened however better late than never! Thank you a great chapter and Thomas gets more and more intriguing
| Title: Chapter 10: An Enemy and A Goblin
| 06 Dec 2017 11:27 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Hahaha! I loved it. Snape to the rescue! And of course Dumbledore didn't tell him the "valuable" package was Harry! lol. Loving it. The descriptions are amazing. The action and plot so enthralling. Fantastic story.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to review, I greatly appreciate it and am happy you are enjoying my little story!
| Title: Chapter 11: A Tentative Realization
| 06 Dec 2017 10:59 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I loved, LOVED that last line. Fantastic chapter. I loved all the descriptions, Snape's thoughts, Harry's reactions, their communication. Just fabulous. And now Snape is starting to see. Love it. Your Snape is superb. And Harry is so in character, and not annoying at all. Just perfect.
Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for your incredibly kind review, it makes me so happy to know you've been enjoying the story. Hope you like the new chapter!
| Title: Chapter 12: A Death to Biases
| 06 Dec 2017 10:08 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Love it. :D Heheh I love Snape's pajamas! And lending them to Harry. Awww. And Harry wanting Snape near while he got up and went to the sink? Sweet, heart melty goo. If only ghost Lily could see how they are kind of getting along. XD I guess the sleeping potion was a lot much though. only a few spoonfuls... Poor Harry, falling asleep so easily. He couldn't have got much nourishment from the soup. I hope Snape will rectify that in the morning. :D
I loved hearing Snape's thoughts and reflections. Yay. And now he's not thinking of Harry as annoying. Little steps. I do hope that he will manage to keep Harry from going back to the Dursley's though.
And poor Draco. Man, he's positively maudlin, and depressed. It's worrying. I really hope he can get out of this horrible situation soon. And his mom if possible. She always seemed good.
Great descriptions in this chapter. I love your writing. I'm hoping for more growth between Harry and Snape, and some hope for Draco. His situation is so depressing right now.
Thanks so much for the update! :D I hope you had a fantastic 25th birthday!
I love you!!! Thank you so so so so much for updating!!!
I love this story so much!! It is very well written and has me hanging on to it! I love it!
I wait eagerly every day for you to update, but I know that you update slowly and I know that it isn't abandoned, it makes me happy that there are some good stories out there which are not abandoned!
Now, on to the story, I guess Yaxley is going to set fire to some community? Some place? And, Draco is turning, how wonderful, Draco is turning, I love it!
To be honest, I like Severus POV the best, his thoughts, you write them so beautifully, sentences like the pillars or beams of lies, the walls of his preconceptions. And as I have already said on many occasions, I love a 'realisation hit' Snape the best, or a guilty Snape. My favourite chapter so far had been chapter 10 and 11.
We kind of always know what Harry is thinking, so I like the others POV best! IS there going it be more torture of Harry, because I love it! Sorry, but I am sadistic!
Author's Response: You are so very sweet to take the time and leave such a thoughtful review. Thank you! Hope you enjoy the new chapter, :D
Very nice. Very very nice. I love it. Absolutely love it. The line Harry said about walking away, it was absolutely terrific. It is the second time I am reading this story and I am loving it the second time too.
I hope that someone makes them all pay.
Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the new chapter! :)
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