| Title: Chapter 11: A Tentative Realization
| 13 May 2017 9:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sorry you are still in pain, thank you for updating great chapter and love how you are developing the characters
Very happy to see more of this engaging story!
Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the new chapter! :D
| Title: Chapter 11: A Tentative Realization
| 10 May 2017 12:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed)
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I adore this chapter. It's in no way forced and the characters are so honest. I love the way you write Harry. Not overly brave, not overly sensitive, just the right amount of self-sacrificing.
Loved Mrs. Weasley too.
The insight into characters motivations by the thought monologues that you provide are also brilliant!
I'd have flipped off the little shit.
Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 10: An Enemy and A Goblin
| 29 Apr 2017 9:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Had to re read a few chapters to get back in the story but well worth it! Great to have you back and wonderful chapter, thank you!
I've returned and I'm so glad you're back! Well done on the job, sorry about the foot, Mumford and sons are fantastic and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review! I'm very glad you've enjoyed my little story.
| Title: Chapter 10: An Enemy and A Goblin
| 27 Apr 2017 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed)
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Finally! Poor Harry's certainly earned a trip to somewhere more hospitable, I'd say. Well... assuming his appalling luck doesn't kick in, again. lol Can't say I'm going to miss Thomas, tbh.
Great chapter! I look forward to future updates.
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback, hope you enjoy the new chapter!
Right, so I know you have another chapter, now, but I still wanted to stop to leave a bit of feedback and my immediate unedited response sounds something like this:
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In attempt at coherency, lemme say that I have immensely enjoyed this story so far, from Draco's discovery of the spell all the way through all the angst and hardship Harry has endured to this point. Love how Elizabeth was able to help Harry and her children in the end. Also, I adore Snape practically grinning like an idiot because Harry has managed to thwart the Dark Lord yet again when he ought to be dead.
Nicely done! And now... to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so excited to know you've enjoyed the story so far, it's means a lot to me that you took time to review, so thank you! Hope you are having a good week so far!
YAY! YOU ARE BACK! I love a cheeky Harry and an snarky Snape.
Author's Response: Thank you for the super sweet review! :D
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