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Reviews For The Blood of the Covenant
I liked the exchange between Snape and Harry. Snape uses a pun and he calls his own potion stupid! That combined with Harry's attitude just spices up that conversation. I wish they talked for longer! What will Snape think if he finds out that Harry is now friendless? Will it bring them closer together? Author's Response: Yeah, Hermione's going to regret it! She's well-intentioned, even if making a horrible mistake, and I couldn't be upset with her (too much) due to her good intentions. Ron is just being dumb. In canon, he's continually jealous of Harry. Jealousy is a green eyed monster and leads people to do terrible things. And yes, it most certainly will bring Harry and Snape closer, now that Harry considers himself friendless! Snape is his only human companionship.
I can't believe that Dumbledore can be this cruel! At first I believed he was just too focused on the greater good but now I see that he's just evil. Nothing can condone sitting by and allowing a child to be abused. I am getting the feeling that Dumbledore hates them both more and more. You ended the chapter in a perfect note, with the words "Thanks You." Author's Response: Yes, yes, Dumbles is not a good guy. Hehe. Just wait till the next bucket of cold water falls. *looks unconvincingly innocent*
I think working together would be a great idea! I’d love to read your stories both fanfiction and original and I certainly would appreciate your opinions on mine. I’m working on a couple of original short stories and one fanfiction. It’s called “For the Greater God” and it also features a meddlesome and heartless Dumbledore. I’d be honored if you’d beta read my story. Although, I probably can’t update it this month. February is the month of exams in Italy. (Why? Just why don’t they use the Avada Kedavra! It’s an easier way to die not to mention an honorable way for a potterhead.) I’ll drop by your facebook page and send you a message with my email address. I hope I’ll get to read more of your stories! Author's Response: It's funny that you question if Dumbledore has a personal vendetta against Harry and Severus...I'm sitting here grinning. You're good. ;) Good luck on your exams! I definitely understand if you don't have time to write for a bit. =)
I am surprised by what you said. That is just like the situation I'm in. I want to become a writer but I need more practice so I have begun to write fan fiction. Unlike you, I am a long way from my goal. There is much to improve in my story but yours is fantastically done. The insight into the characters, the suspense, the thick plot, the emotional moments, they were all skilfully managed. You definitely pulled it off. I hope you do capture your ideas onto paper. I have a feeling it will be a great read! Oh, the bucket is there all right. I have been drenched dozens of times since reading this story. I can feel the bucket hovering over my head ready to assault me with a cold river. You should put a big warning on the story: A Summer Read Only. Risk of Cold Water Dumping Ahead. Author's Response: I think it does explain canon Snape, yes. I don't think Lily would have been friends with the Snape that we meet in the books, which would mean that he changed at some point. I've been very close to becoming bitter myself, but there's always been that one person to pull me back; what would have happened if that one person wasn't there? You know what, I like you. We should work together on stories. I will be happy to beta your fanfiction, and your original things too. (I'm way worse about doing non-fanfiction in a timely manner though.) I have a Facebook page set up for myself as a fanfiction author under my user name, "The Lonely God With A Box." If you care to, we could talk from there, maybe move it over to my personal Facebook and/or email. I don't want to give out my name or email over a public review though, naturally. But seriously, contact me if you're interested in working together. I really like that warning. It's made me laugh really hard. You're supposed to be going to bed though!
So...no Ron is Dumbledore, no Ron using a time-turner? Okay you had me going . lol Author's Response: Nope, it was all a dream! Glad you liked it though. :)
Good night. :) Author's Response: Ooooh, the Dumbledore Plot is definitely one to be discovered slowly. Let me know when that cold water is dumped on you! *evil grin* Actually, yes, I have considered writing original works. This story was actually an experiment to see if I could do that. I think I pulled it off. I have a couple original ideas floating around in my head, but fanfiction keeps distracting me from them!
Now, I do believe I shall go to sleep. I bid you adieu. (Or maybe the adiue will wait for one more chapter.) Sorry for the misspelling. After midnight, grammar goes flying out the window. Author's Response: I like how you picked up on some of that stuff with Snape! He "hated Harry infinitely" but was willing to help him anyway. He chose to advocate for Harry to Dumbledore, and wanted to see Sirius torn limb from limb when he thought Sirius was guilty. Harry will eventually come around, if you haven't figured, but I know I would feel pretty angry if someone told me they were my parent after antagonizing me. (I had actually planned for Harry to accept it well, and then Harry was like "Nope, not happening.") No need to apologize for misspelling. It's perfectly understandable. :)
Yo, don't worry about me! I have plenty of practice with getting through the day after spending the night reading stories. The trick is to sleep with your eyes open and paste a smile on your face so no one will realise you aren't paying them the least bit of attention! Author's Response: Hehe, I don't want to spoil anything! *whistles loudly* Okay, I won't worry about you, but feel free to sleep if you want to!
Author's Response: Yo, you should go to bed. It'll be there in the morning. :)
Every single fact shocked me to the core. Harry was having hallucinations? Snape's memories were false? Dumbledore is an idiot? My mouth dropped open at the beginning of the chapter and didn't close until the end. Absolutely brilliant! This is both original and fantastically written. I love your Severus and I am heartbroken that his memories were all taken away. Did I mention that I hate Dumbledore? Thanks for a fantastic read! Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Prepare yourself for drenches of cold water though. I just posted the epilogue so you can get the whole story now! Oh, and please review lots. I like your reviews! :D |
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