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Title: Headache and Heartache 22 Sep 2014 12:38 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter very spooky thank you
Title: Headache and Heartache 20 Sep 2014 2:45 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!!!!!!!
    They finally get rescued and Harry has to pass out!
    You're killing me here! Seriously though, I am so glad that they are finally outta there!
    Great chapter, but evil cliffie! Please update soon.
Title: Headache and Heartache 19 Sep 2014 4:38 pm
Reviewer: kazetoame (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm still confused. Hermione seems to have forgotten she was Harry's friend and that Ron is the love her life and most important person to her one second, then the next she is the one opening the door to save Harry and Severus. What is going on here?? The story was going great and then a few chapters ago it went off. It's just strange that Hermione would abandon Harry, especially since she the one who stuck by him in Goblet. Here she is only worried about Ron (who is now intrusted with some sort of mission dealing with a time turner that no one in their right mind would ever give him access to and is suddenly a mature adult off to save the world, when you have him still the immature jealous git) yet still saves Harry. I'm LOST!!

    Regardless of that little side plot, I like what I do understand, it's what keeps me reading. Please, just please, explain that side plot to which I have been so confused about before you end this story.

    Author's Response:

    Well, next chapter will help clear up some of this, because Hermione and Harry will have a talk.  What has been established so far is that Dumbledore asked Hermione to stop hanging out with Harry, and being the "adults are always right" person that she is, Hermione's first reaction was to do as she was told.  She's beginning to regret her actions, though, as shown by the comment that she coudn't bare to lose both her friends like that.  She didn't go down there to rescue Harry and Severus.  She was headed to class and happened to find them.

    So Harry and Hermione will talk next chapter, cry a little, make up, she'll apologize, and Harry will forgive her.  They might be able to figure a few things out about Ron as well.  I think the problem that's presenting itself in this story is that I'm writing almost exclusively from Harry and/or Severus' POV.  And since they're probably the two most out-of-the-loop people, it leaves the reader a bit more in the dark than if I chose to write from others' PsOV.  For example, please notice (it's a clue) that I have never written from Dumbledore's POV. 

Title: Headache and Heartache 19 Sep 2014 5:18 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great :)
Title: Just Another Reality 08 Sep 2014 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much a great chapter. I hope Hermione. Omes back to Harry
Title: Just Another Reality 08 Sep 2014 12:28 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no. Poor Harry.
    At least he knows now that Sirius didn't molest him, but I suspect that someone DID.

    I hope they get out of their soon, or Harry might lose it and Snape too for that matter.

    Great chapter, and can't wait for the next chapter. I am so sad that Ron is gone for good, and especially for Hermione.Still wonder what Ron is up to.

    Author's Response: Your suspicions about Harry are not unfounded.  24 hours and they'll be out for sure!
Title: Born of Love, Produced by Fear 07 Sep 2014 12:32 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I do not like the term "For the greater good" it means trouble! Thank you
Title: Wizards Who Meddle With Time 07 Sep 2014 12:25 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very convoluted! I'm not sure how you are keeping all the strands together but well done!

    Author's Response: All the strands are closely linked, and I think about it every night before fall asleep.  Thanks!
Title: Born of Love, Produced by Fear 05 Sep 2014 9:19 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    GRRR, a cliffy! *sends severals stunning curses, bone breaking curses and stinging hexes at random while other people within 20 metres range duck for cover*

    Now I'm so curious what's up with Ron. Anyway goodluck with school starting again

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I've been super busy with work and school so it might be a bit before I can update.  Rest assured the story is not forgotten though.
Title: Soul of Ice 04 Sep 2014 1:01 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting chapter!

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