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Reviews For The Blood of the Covenant
They finally get rescued and Harry has to pass out! You're killing me here! Seriously though, I am so glad that they are finally outta there! Great chapter, but evil cliffie! Please update soon.
Regardless of that little side plot, I like what I do understand, it's what keeps me reading. Please, just please, explain that side plot to which I have been so confused about before you end this story. Author's Response: Well, next chapter will help clear up some of this, because Hermione and Harry will have a talk. What has been established so far is that Dumbledore asked Hermione to stop hanging out with Harry, and being the "adults are always right" person that she is, Hermione's first reaction was to do as she was told. She's beginning to regret her actions, though, as shown by the comment that she coudn't bare to lose both her friends like that. She didn't go down there to rescue Harry and Severus. She was headed to class and happened to find them. So Harry and Hermione will talk next chapter, cry a little, make up, she'll apologize, and Harry will forgive her. They might be able to figure a few things out about Ron as well. I think the problem that's presenting itself in this story is that I'm writing almost exclusively from Harry and/or Severus' POV. And since they're probably the two most out-of-the-loop people, it leaves the reader a bit more in the dark than if I chose to write from others' PsOV. For example, please notice (it's a clue) that I have never written from Dumbledore's POV.
At least he knows now that Sirius didn't molest him, but I suspect that someone DID. I hope they get out of their soon, or Harry might lose it and Snape too for that matter. Great chapter, and can't wait for the next chapter. I am so sad that Ron is gone for good, and especially for Hermione.Still wonder what Ron is up to. Author's Response: Your suspicions about Harry are not unfounded. 24 hours and they'll be out for sure!
Author's Response: All the strands are closely linked, and I think about it every night before fall asleep. Thanks!
Now I'm so curious what's up with Ron. Anyway goodluck with school starting again Author's Response: Thanks! I've been super busy with work and school so it might be a bit before I can update. Rest assured the story is not forgotten though.
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